Arvin Rivas Poet Light Verse

Facebook Cliche

I'm here writing something again 

I know what your thinking, here he goes once more

Don't worry it isn't for your eyes it's for fame 

This status will have love and so much more in store

If only I can think straight on what to write 

I bet I will get more than one facebook like 

You will see where my true talents lie

Omg last night I posted a status and got this many comments

I was like loling till I hurt my stomach 

I've seen so many selfies that i'm even part of that trend 

So many pics of couples in love or so they pretend

After the pic they go their seperate ways 

We all go on to post another day  

This is just my take on facebook cliches

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Skat A April 22, 2014 at 1:49 PM Arvin, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2014 at 12:06 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Arvin :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A April 21, 2014 at 5:59 AM Interesting, Arvin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend ~ LINDA ~ Arvin Rivas April 21, 2014 at 4:43 PM Thank you for the contest offer Linda I'll be posting more poems soon also I'll be following and reading your poems as well :)