Facebook and the Monster - Part 1 of 2

Facebook and the Monster

There is an advert on TV 
Selling Facebook to you and me 
And it all seems so good
Wholesome and fun
This is how life really can be 
If only you join the Facebook community  

And it all looks so safe and soft
Nothing can go wrong 
Those first tentative steps you take
On Facebook 
Will net you real friends 
The kind that will stand by you over and over again 

Will maybe end up being your best man
Lifelong pal
Even your wife  
Or a soul mate for life 
An ally when times get rough 
And it’s all thanks to Facebook

But if you look past the soft focussed view 
The warm feeling, captured by that lovely hue 
Today reality is much too bleak to view 
Which is why people are using Facebook 
To avoid real life 
And not going out with their pal, ally or wife 

Real life just contains too much strife 
Stay online 
Where it is ‘safe’?
Where you don’t have to risk 
Not being ‘you’
Well the one you have now created in Facebook Land 

Where you can be anyone you want
Especially not yourself 
Who would want to be that anyway? 
Even you don’t value you anymore 
You have effectively shut the door 
On yourself and your old life

Maybe even your wife 
Where one in five quote ‘Facebook’ the source 
Of their marital strife
Before the judge, in court, in real life 
That day you have to come face to face 
With the fact that you have a wife

And she’s going to divorce you because your online self 
Has taken over and the man she loved 
Has become an unsatisfiable arsehole

Who knows anyone on Facebook anyway?
You never meet up, get together 
You don’t even know who you are messaging today
Or if those events you are being sold have any basis in reality?

Your ‘mate’ on Facebook –  you know ‘Dave’?
Who is ‘Dave’ anyway?  
But you don’t ask – it’s not the Facebook way
Online he has a great life, seems a ‘great guy’
But in reality is he maybe a crook?
Someone who would not give a f*ck 
About you if he came up against you in real life 

Would stab you in the back 
And not think twice – that’s the kind of people you meet in real life
As long as he’s won and it’s important to look the champ
Especially in Facebook Land  
You bet his ‘success’ would go on his page  
(But how he got it all, well that’s another tale)
Just so you can see that he is ‘the man’, with ‘the plan’

(kindly continue to part 2)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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