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Noel Potter

Date: 1/28/2013 8:43:00 PM

i enjoy writing what comes to mind,yet i enjoy writing about my life and about reality, this poem is written based on my own opinion, i am greatful that all of you took time to read it as well as my others i have posted here, i don't and never will knock on the door when some one doesn't like what i write, that is part of writing, every one will not like it, but if one person enjoys it then i am happy, every poem will not be written to the point that every one will like them,, still thanks for reading

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/12/2012 5:32:00 PM

You are so sweet, Noel. Thank you for your kind comment. So glad you enjoy the good Lord's inspiration. I wrote 5 poems this morning. I don't think they will ever stop.....I'm up to 1,400 so far. God bless, Maureen

Red Fiery

Date: 1/11/2012 8:31:00 AM

Noel i have read ur other poems and I can say with that confidence that ur a serious writer, forget abt criticism, i am with u and now u see u have a friend here...with no offence to anyone...i am sure most of the sensible writers will agree with my opinion though no impositions applied....!

Noel Potter
Date: 1/11/2012 9:54:00 AM

continued , i learned along time ago that i am not going to ever write that perfect poem like i dream,, but i enjoy working on trying to write it, each person has their own view on others writes, so i enjoy getting both negative and positive comments because i leearn from both and it helps me become a better poet,

Noel Potter
Date: 1/11/2012 9:52:00 AM

thank you very much for the nice comment and for reading my work,, i enjoy writing it's the one thing i have discovered that helps me relax and avoid unwanted stress,, i will be reading your writings, i am still trying to figure this site out but i will have it to were i can drift around before the day is up lol,,, i enjoy getting

Lebedyenko Berborodov

Date: 1/10/2012 11:35:00 PM

I am afraid that this slightly idle concept has baffled me. I dislike the poem, dear boy, and I hope that with my critical advice your ability to write verse shall marginally improve.

Noel Potter
Date: 1/11/2012 9:58:00 AM

i'm just going to say this and leave it at that,,, i am not trying to be perfect,, i write because i feel that in my heart and not every poem is going to be liked by others,, i have read several i didn't understand nor like,, but that is me, and others may like some thing others do not,, but my friend that is how it goes when you post writings online to see how others feel about it , i expect nothing more than honesty and that is it,,

Lebedyenko Berborodov
Date: 1/10/2012 11:50:00 PM

He who dares to explain the mysteries of language is a writer of insipid poetry.

Noel Potter
Date: 1/10/2012 11:46:00 PM

thank you for taking the time to read this,, thank you for your comment, one question though,, explain to me how i need to improve in my writing ,no i am not being negative in this reply i am asking what you feel i need to improve and how i can improve in the area you feel it is off!!!!!!