Face In the Window

I see your silhouette, through my window,
caught in the moon's light, on the far hill,
as you sit alone, where the stone seat is.
Once we were young lovers.
You live on the cobbled road, where the stone gates are,
and I,
above the store where my father make shoes.
I still carry the scars from those days,
when we were young, innocent and fragile.
You opened your heart, to a young lad,
far beneath your station.
That summer was alive.
We picked fragrant wild flowers,
taking turns placing them in our hair.
We covered every meadow unseen,
and swam naked in your father's lake,
that lays below the hill, where the stone seat is,
beneath the elm.
It stormed the last time I saw you.
The etched sadness on your face,
covered in tears.
Your fists pounding the chest of your father's man,
as each stroke from his whip cut deep,
deep in my back, screaming the words,
you don't belong.
My blood spilled that day, as I laid for hours,
unable to move, balled up, rain pouring down,
as the ground ran red.
Over the years scars remain,
tattooed reminders.
As I look out my window and see your silhouette,
under the moon's light, alone and haunting,
I remain a store keepers son, 
Wondering, always wondering.
While you sit alone,
do you cry like I do?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 4/16/2020 11:13:00 AM
Frederic, such an emotional narrative poem which pulls on our heartstrings. Congratulations on the placement of your creative write. ~ Sonia
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Date: 4/12/2020 6:32:00 PM
Wow that’s such a beautiful and powerful piece Frederic! Love can cross any station in life and I’m so glad the world has made some wonderful changes as humanity has grown. This poem is so deserving of first place! Congratulations my friend! Easter blessings, Connie xxoo
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:12:00 AM
so many emotions Frederic, and winning worthy for sure...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/8/2016 6:38:00 PM
Wow. Intense and moving. Nicely done, and congrats on the well deserved win. This is really, really, good. -G
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:34:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations on your win in SKAT'S "Premiere Contest number 9" It was my pleasure judging this one for my sister. Stop by and enjoy your win on Skat's Blog "BLACKBIRDS." with lots of love LINDA (For: SKAT)
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