Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Face In the Mirror Says -

                Good morning
                                                                                       gninrom dooG

                 look tired today
                                                                                   yadot derit kool I

                 I wash my face
                                                                                      ecaf ym hsaw I

                 Taking on a little makeup
                                                                        puekam elttil a no gnikaT

                 Brushing my teeth
                                                                                  hteet ym gnihsurB

                 Finally, the lipstick on my lips
                                                                   spil ym no kcitspil eht ,yllaniF

                 I smile to the mirror
                                                                               rorrim eht ot elims I

                 Now I`m ready for the day
                                                                                 ! yad doog a evaH

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Hat Bueckert August 24, 2022 at 11:15 AM Loved this, very clever! :)

Debbie Duncan March 22, 2017 at 3:26 PM cute little write :) xoxo Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2017 at 3:30 PM - Thank you, Debbie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brittany Reynolds October 27, 2012 at 6:46 PM Amusing, a little crazy, but fun! Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2012 at 3:55 AM Brittany, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kellum Gray August 30, 2012 at 12:23 PM This really made my day Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2012 at 12:33 PM It makes me happy. Thank you for visiting and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Aseem Desai May 23, 2012 at 1:02 AM that was awesome!! Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2012 at 3:19 AM Sameer, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

John Lipari May 2, 2012 at 5:55 AM Great work...avant garde, I like it! Anne-Lise Andresen May 2, 2012 at 5:57 AM Glad you like it John, thank you for visit. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Terry L. Allen April 15, 2012 at 2:05 AM I guess you got a little more than you reflected for. Very cute and a fun read. Have a Blessed day. TLee Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2012 at 4:01 AM Terry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Charles Ruble April 3, 2012 at 10:13 PM Love the poem,you commented on my Mirror poem and told me you were writing one,love it.Thanks for the comments you have been giving me,you'r to kind,try to write the best I know how.Again thanks. Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2012 at 2:24 PM Charles, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

John Beam March 9, 2012 at 4:07 PM very creative, thanks for comments on Haiku Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2012 at 4:10 PM Thank you John for reading and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Sev Smith February 17, 2012 at 4:47 AM This is so amazing! I thought the backwards words were in another language and was like... uuh hahaha :P I got it eventually :) Brilliant idea!! Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2012 at 4:57 AM Thank you Sev for reading it. - oxox Anne-Lise

Karen Deeks February 5, 2012 at 9:28 AM I love this for your innovation and reflection in this piece.. Sheer brilliance in concept, Karen (am smiling) (top o the tree!) Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2012 at 10:20 AM Thank you Karen for reading my poem yoday. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Maureen Lefanue February 5, 2012 at 3:31 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise for yet another of your kind comments. I enjoyed your Face In the Mirror Says - very clever! Love, Maureen x0x Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2012 at 5:38 AM Thank you Maureen for reading it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Eastman February 2, 2012 at 8:03 AM Very origional and fun to read.... Watch out you may have invented a new form of poetry... Now I'll never be able to catch up... I'm still rhyming...LOL Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2012 at 12:02 PM Hi,there you are!Thank you for reading my poem! oxox love Anne-lise

Steven Mossburg February 2, 2012 at 4:16 AM Very clever and creative. You made me chuckle today. Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2012 at 4:18 AM Thank you Steven for reading my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Alan Douglas February 1, 2012 at 6:36 AM Dear Anne Lise, Fun, except for the lipstick ! Curios to know, I'd say your name is not English, is your poetry written in your native tongue ? Or is English a 2nd language. I cannot tell from the writting. Love Alan Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2012 at 6:55 AM Thank you Alan for reading my poem today.oxox love Anne-Lise

Dawn Mclaughlin February 1, 2012 at 3:48 AM Love this xxx thank you for you're lovely comment xx Dawn Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2012 at 3:49 AM Thank you for reading my poem today Dawn. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Laila Andresen Mjelde February 1, 2012 at 1:59 AM Hi! unique...creative....like it!!!oxox Laila ;0) Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2012 at 2:01 AM Thank you Laila for reading my poem today.-oxox love Anne-Lise

J Eliza James January 31, 2012 at 4:10 PM Hi Anne Your fingers on the keyboard have talent within them Backward and forwards you type out your words with feelings of life's rhythm. Thank you for sharing Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2012 at 1:49 AM Thank you for sweet comment and reading my poem Eliza. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Mohammad Yamin January 31, 2012 at 12:35 PM Interesting poem -so simple yet so true. Ending the poem with word WHAT.... is really smart and gives a new dimension to it. Truly beautiful. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my poem Lost Hope, Anne. You have given hope to hopelessness. Who lives till the springtime, darling. -Mohammad Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2012 at 12:38 PM Thank you for reading my poem today Mohammad. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Maxeen Dennis January 30, 2012 at 8:22 AM Good one! Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2012 at 9:45 AM Thank you for reading my poem Maxeen. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Michele Ortiz January 30, 2012 at 7:35 AM This made me smile :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2012 at 9:44 AM Thank you Michele for reading it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jslambert Mister Roboto January 29, 2012 at 11:46 PM very unique........................, yerv euqinu pot fo eht gninrom ot aY~ Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2012 at 3:01 AM Thank you for reading my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Phyllis Babcock January 29, 2012 at 3:50 PM UNIQUE and I will have a good day. ha ha. Thanks for all your comments, so nice to hear from you. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2012 at 3:53 PM Thank you for reading my poem Phyllis.Yes have a good day my friend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud January 29, 2012 at 10:35 AM a unique approach, anne lise... much delighted by your creativity; good morning! :) huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2012 at 10:38 AM Thank you Nette for reading my poem today.oxox love Anne-Lise

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