Lin Lane Poet Free verse

Fabulous Fun Footles-Fairytale

Adventures In Wonderland-Condensed Version

Alice
malice

Rabbit's
habit

"I'm late
can't wait"

tardy
lordy!

deep hole
took toll

she fell
oh well

found note
I quote,

"Drink me"
it's free

too big
took swig

she drank
then shrank

ate cake
mistake

Hatter
chatter

treed cat
too fat

March Hare
he's there

Red Queen
so mean

beguiled
poor child

from shakes
she wakes

it seemed
she dreamed

amends
tale ends


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March 22nd, 2017
Jan Allison's Fabulous Fun Footles

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Joanna Daniel April 4, 2017 at 10:34 AM This one is awesome, Lin:) congratulations:) deserves a 10:) Lin Lane April 5, 2017 at 9:33 AM As thanks, No. A 10 from you is an honor.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 8:20 PM Lin, you did an amazing job and deserved your great win. Congrats. So clever to use this fairy tale. Lin Lane April 3, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thanks, Andrea, and congratulations to you as well for your string of great footless.

John Michaels April 2, 2017 at 4:51 AM A very clever piece. Well done! Lin Lane April 3, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thank you, John.

Connie Marcum Wong April 1, 2017 at 10:06 PM "deep hole took toll" I love it! Wow Lin, this is one of the most brilliant footles I have ever read! Going into my Faves. I sure hope this takes top honors! Happy Easter my friend. xxxooo 7 ; ) Lin Lane April 3, 2017 at 9:57 AM Thank you so very much for your terrific comments, Connie. Each one is truly appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues April 1, 2017 at 6:16 AM Clever! Congrats! Lin Lane April 1, 2017 at 8:26 PM Thanks for the compliment, Kim.

Alexis Y. March 31, 2017 at 5:37 PM Hi Lin, I agree with Jan, you told the whole story in the footle form. Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis Lin Lane April 1, 2017 at 8:25 PM Thank you, Alexis.

Roy Pett March 31, 2017 at 5:35 PM Brilliant and clever write Lin, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :)) Lin Lane April 1, 2017 at 8:24 PM Thank you very much

Jan Allison March 31, 2017 at 5:00 PM Such a brilliant fun string of poems Lin:-)You told the whole story in so few lines in a very clever way:-)Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane April 1, 2017 at 8:23 PM Many thanks for creating a fun contest and for liking this one, Jan.

Charlie Smith March 28, 2017 at 7:26 PM Fun stuff Lin, best wishes... Lin Lane April 1, 2017 at 8:21 PM Thanks, Charlie!

Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2017 at 12:32 AM Ha ha, this is sheer brilliance l! 7 all the way. Lin Lane March 23, 2017 at 7:41 AM Merci, Richard. Thanks so much for thinking so. lol and great to see you.

Elizabeth Kinch March 22, 2017 at 5:46 PM So many great footles being posted. I haven't tried one yet but this is inspiring me to have a try. Great theme Lin. Good luck in the contest. Lin Lane March 22, 2017 at 6:07 PM Thank you, Elizabeth. It's not difficult, and once you start it's difficult to stop.

Alexis Y. March 22, 2017 at 3:24 PM Hi Lin, I really enjoyed this tale. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Lin Lane March 22, 2017 at 6:07 PM Thanks a bunch, Alexis.

Tim Smith March 22, 2017 at 3:21 PM I quip...fun trip Lin Lane March 22, 2017 at 7:56 PM You're such a sweetheart. Thank you for the thought...hugs to you. Tim Smith March 22, 2017 at 6:51 PM I told Jan she could end the contest because I've just read the winner. Lin Lane March 22, 2017 at 6:06 PM real cute...a hoot ~ Thanks. Tim.