Elizabeth Kinch Poet Footle

Fabulous Fun Footles - Berry Drunk

Monkeys
In trees

Eating
Berries

Berries
Make drunk

Monkeys
Ker plunk

Rolling
On ground

Stand up
Fall down

Sleep off
Drunk state

Monkeys
Mistake

23rd March 2017

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Alexis Y. April 1, 2017 at 9:30 AM Hi Elizabeth, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis Elizabeth Kinch April 1, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thank you

Jan Allison March 31, 2017 at 7:22 PM You made a fun poem for the contest Elizabeth. Your first footle was fabulous and rhymed perfectly but the following footles did not have exact rhyme:-) Many congrats on your placement in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Elizabeth Kinch April 1, 2017 at 12:53 AM I'm still learning. I'll try another one soon. Thank you for your help and encouragement Jan x

John Michaels March 25, 2017 at 8:00 AM Nice visuals! Good luck with the contest! Elizabeth Kinch March 25, 2017 at 12:22 PM Thank you John for visiting and commenting.

Roy Pett March 24, 2017 at 6:34 PM Great footle Elizabeth, funny and well written, Roy. :)) Elizabeth Kinch March 25, 2017 at 1:45 AM Thank you Roy.

Joseph May March 24, 2017 at 7:31 AM Very nice Footles Elizabeth..best wishes Elizabeth Kinch March 24, 2017 at 10:47 AM Thank you for visiting and commenting Joseph.

Chris Green March 23, 2017 at 7:15 AM This was fun Elizabeth. I wonder, were those monkeys drinking banana daiquiris? Elizabeth Kinch March 23, 2017 at 2:17 PM Haha Chris:)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 23, 2017 at 3:32 AM Delightful dear, Elizabet. I start my day with a smile. Thank you and a 7! Elizabeth Kinch March 23, 2017 at 6:25 AM Thank you Demetrios, I'm glad I made you smile. :)