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Fabulous Fun Footles

I Love my Mother in law. Phone rings Ear stings Door knocks Nerve shocks Come in Large gin Be nice Head lice Hair gel Strong smell Stale wee Flows free Stand here My dear Trap door what for Goodbye Large sigh In jail Good tale. 20/03/2017. Fabulous fun footles competition. Sponsored by Jan Allison

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/20/2017 4:21:00 PM

These are very nice, I should try doing this I have one called Caturday. Thank you for reading my Black Bird :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/20/2017 4:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Debbie, I have read quite a lot of your works which I found enjoyable, your very talented, Roy. :))

John Michaels

Date: 4/29/2017 12:45:00 PM

This is brilliant, Roy!! Each line gets funnier as it goes along, until the "twist", which is an absolute classic! Well done! Regards, John.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/29/2017 2:40:00 PM

Thank you very much John, so pleased you liked this. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 8:22:00 PM

haha, GOOD JOB and congrats with this tale!!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/3/2017 2:12:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea so pleased you liked this fun write, Roy. :))

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/1/2017 6:14:00 AM

Back for Congrats!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/1/2017 7:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim, I really appreciate your support, Roy. :))

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/31/2017 5:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Roy Pett
Date: 3/31/2017 5:54:00 PM

Thank you very much Alexis much appreciated, Roy.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2017 4:47:00 PM

My hubby and I both laughed out loud at the funny string of footles Roy. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 3/31/2017 5:10:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan, so pleased you both liked this, great competition enjoyed very much, thanks for the placement. Roy, :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2017 4:09:00 AM

- Funny and well done, Roy :))) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 3/21/2017 4:46:00 AM

Thank you very much Ann-Lise your so kind as was my M-I-L. so pleased you found this funny, enjoyed writing this, thanks again for your support, Roy. :))

Darren White

Date: 3/21/2017 3:27:00 AM

Hahaha, Roy. That must be some wish of yours :) Good luck in the contest!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/21/2017 4:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Darren for your very kind comment, so pleased you found this funny, adored my M-I-L honestly, (wife may read this!)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 3/21/2017 2:24:00 AM

Love this funny footle....I wish I had a trap door for my M in L often! Another form I haven't tried Roy, you keep inspiring me. Good luck in the contest.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/21/2017 4:35:00 AM

Thank you very much Elizabeth for your very kind comment, this is the first time I have attempted this form found it enjoyable and fun, I think inspiration is a two way street, the amazing poets on this site such as you are a massive inspiration to me offering support and encouragement, thanks again Roy, :))

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/20/2017 9:54:00 AM

Funny! I try very hard NOT to be that M-I-L!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/20/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thanks very much Kim, I really did adore my M-I-L sadly not with us now, pleased you liked this, Roy. :))