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Beautiful blue buddleia brimming with bejeweled butterflies which flutter frequently from branch to branch Fabulous freesias sensationally scented perfumed perfection Ruby red rambling roses dainty daffodils and jaunty jonquils colourful crocus and charming celandines blooms bring breathtaking beauty glorifying Gertrude’s garden horticultural heaven! Flower or Flowers in Imagism Form - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 03/13/21

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Michael Ellis

Date: 3/26/2021 2:28:00 AM

A Literation has never sounded better. This is a consonant buffet, an enchanting sound poem with more dips than Dr. Seuss. Line 3 you can delete (which) and go with the -Gerund VERB- FLUTTERING frequently from.....But what do I know...Beautiful as is...I know you turned heads in the contest...This poem blossoms & Blooms boldly......Michael E.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2021 1:58:00 PM

lovely write, my friend - so glad this was a big winner. i'm guessing Gertrude is Gertrude Jekyll? LOL, that's the limit of my horticultural knowledge!

Constance La France

Date: 3/15/2021 8:51:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my Imagism Challenge on the theme of a flower or flowers, your poem has such beautiful imagery and I love your chosen image, well done _Constance

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/15/2021 6:46:00 AM

WoW! Jan, You out did yourself with this one. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/15/2021 4:02:00 AM

Wow Beautiful flowers and their beauty so well captured in your poem Jan. Congrats on your win.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2021 2:47:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Jan ... sorry I have not read it before ... the crocus is a "strong" flower ... it even flowers in the snow ... it is one of the first signs of spring :) - Congratulations with your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/14/2021 10:32:00 PM

What a beautiful garden, Jan framed in marvelous alliteration! Congratulations on your sweet scented win! Hugs:)

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 3/14/2021 10:20:00 PM

Hi Jan! I really like the alliteration in this poem! Beautiful pic to go with it. Congratulations on your win. It’s cool winning together with you. Hugs sent from California, Jennifer

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/14/2021 8:06:00 PM

Such a beautiful garden Jan, many congrats on your win with your fragrant words mmmm ... Love and hugs Ann xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/14/2021 5:59:00 PM

You are a master at this!!

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 3/14/2021 5:11:00 PM

This is certainly filled with lovely images and scents that give the reader images. Congrats on first place. Janis

Marilene Evans

Date: 3/14/2021 4:54:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan. I would love to be surrounded with colors and scents, pleasing to the eyes and nose. Wonderfully done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2021 4:35:00 PM

wow, Congratuations back at ya, Jan

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 3/14/2021 4:17:00 PM

It's a heavenly garden!! Congratulations, Jan, on your win for this brilliant write!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2021 2:58:00 PM

Thanks so much Newton:-) hugs jan xx

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/14/2021 3:48:00 PM

Enjoyed your alliterative beauty. Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2021 2:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Juliet:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2021 3:44:00 PM

Beautiful blooms succinctly described--BIG congrats on your TOP win, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2021 2:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Vijay:-) hugs jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/14/2021 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan. Such a beautiful garden you have described in your poem! Love ~ Mala

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2021 2:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Malabika:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2021 3:19:00 PM

Big congrats on your top win, Jan!! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2021 2:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2021 2:15:00 PM

I had to look up images of Buddleia and they are quite beautiful, Jan. Never saw one before now. You have included many wonderful spring flowers in your poem. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2021 2:56:00 PM

It's called the butterfly bush:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/14/2021 2:12:00 PM

A beautiful garden you describe in this poem Jan, definitely horticultural heaven. Congratulations on your win in the contest ~ Belle :-) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2021 2:55:00 PM

Thanks so much Belle:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/14/2021 11:51:00 AM

I do remember gardens like this, but can not recall seeing one since honeybees did a flit, so you may have written an historic poem! Congratulations! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2021 2:04:00 PM

A lot of poetic licence indeed Rico lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball

Date: 3/14/2021 10:18:00 AM

Very cleverly and beautifully written Jan. Loved it. Made me long for my garden. God Bless, JB

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2021 2:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Judy:-) hugs Jan xx