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I strut the bars of night Rawhide jacket with chains Disco gyres through punk seventies— High on beer, Marlboro Leather brands me-- rebel Innocence gone from wild kisses. Nette Onclaud Contest: Knit Your Fabric 11.08. 17

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Date: 1/7/2019 10:54:00 PM
Your wonderful imagery captures the moment in time perfectly, Leon. I remember it well. I enjoyed you compelling poem, especially your last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/15/2017 3:03:00 PM
Very cool one. I am picturing James Dean or the Fonz!! Congrats, Leon.
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Date: 11/15/2017 2:44:00 AM
What a great entry Leon! I can see why it is a top winner. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 11/14/2017 6:44:00 AM
Interesting write Leon. It amazes me how we try to make a statement to the world as to who we are by what we wear.
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Date: 11/13/2017 12:34:00 PM
Excellent write, Leon, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/13/2017 9:45:00 AM
you captured the adventurous spirit of the 70s with such flair, leon...thanks for sharing and finest congrats on your stunning win!
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Date: 11/9/2017 8:25:00 PM
I can visualize the clothing and smell the smoke-filled bar. Well done!
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