Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

Fable's Dreamland

And dusk invites 
more bouncing glee,
as ribbons knot 
Queen Fey’s gold  stick
like wiggles coil
on toes, how free
to laugh around 
while clouds frolic.
when kiddies shout,
"let's pirouette",
while hours sway 
in minuet!


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Alexis Y. March 11, 2017 at 10:56 PM Hi Nette, I really enjoyed this fable. Great imagery as well. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Eve Roper March 11, 2017 at 9:09 PM Wonderful fable, Nette, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2014 at 2:53 PM Nette,, Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda

Joyce Johnson July 17, 2014 at 6:52 PM Very pretty. congratulations on our win. Love, Joyce

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 16, 2014 at 10:06 AM Congrats on yor fantastic top wining poem! Fairyland fun in jolly rhyme! Warm wishes nette.

Roy Jerden July 16, 2014 at 8:52 AM Very nice tale, Nette! Congratulations!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 16, 2014 at 1:22 AM Beautiful write Nette,, congrats on top place win!

Jan Allison July 15, 2014 at 7:36 PM Simply enchanting - a worthy winner:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman July 15, 2014 at 12:09 PM This was a beautifully developed write! Beautifully written piece.

Kelly Deschler March 10, 2014 at 6:29 PM This was a wonderful, whimsical poem, Nette. I enjoyed this so much. An enchanting write! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the great comments! :)

Donna Jones March 9, 2014 at 11:12 PM Who doesn't love to blow those bubbles....and this is a magical sumer fun poem nett..sure to be on top.

Monterey Sirak March 9, 2014 at 6:06 AM So playful and fun. A joy to read.

Sara Kendrick March 9, 2014 at 6:06 AM Great flow in this one..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Russell Sivey March 7, 2014 at 11:02 PM You certainly brought the child out from within me! Each line lit me up with a smile of tenderness and joy of being a child! You are a genius of a poet my friend! Was this a challenge for you, because it seemed to flow so easily throughout your poem! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!

Lucilla Carrillo March 7, 2014 at 8:15 PM This is very beautiful Nette. Sometimes I wish I lived in a fairy land. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Tiaua M Ioane March 7, 2014 at 5:35 PM Very artistic, beautiful setting for an escape from our troubled world - your dreamland! Tiaua.

Jack Horne March 7, 2014 at 2:54 PM love this truly magical piece, Nette

Paul Callus March 7, 2014 at 2:06 PM An exciting delve into the garden of dreams where the imagination frolics unconstrained...

Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2014 at 1:41 PM - If I become 99 years ..... I will always have a bit of "child" in my soul ..... dreams, joy and a little adventure .... Nice to read your lovely poem, Nette. - ALWAYS!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop March 7, 2014 at 1:24 PM Enchantment ...A world escape to magic..Yes these are such feelings you transmitted in this poem.Happy Friday sweet Nette...Make the best of it..Hugs

Carrie Richards March 7, 2014 at 1:07 PM This could not be more delightful.....and makes one want to be childlike again. A frolic through each stanza.... Love it !!