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She struts from the pages of infamy Black bold and beautiful No straightening of her Afro She owns her gorgeous Forget “The man,” She’s got things to do Not concerned with his master fetish In her world women rule If you cross her Honey you are the fool Her voice is smooth dark chocolate with just a hint of bitter She’s both a saint and sinner No skinny thinking Curves are for winners There is rhythm running through her veins She is steeped in strength stories birthed from palatial pain When you try to hold her down she rises up again Her every page the hidden embodiment of America History She faces the future clothed in mystery Hear her harmony notes On forever she floats Faithfully fantastic she’s the embodiment of hope. She’s every true story that has ever been told If you try to confine her she’s impossible to hold Add your own chapter line and verse You are born from nobility quench your inner thirst Perfection doesn’t need to be rehearsed. Dedicated to my friend Valerie Thibadeaux in honour of Black History Month.

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Date: 3/6/2024 11:54:00 AM
A lovely/tribute write to your friend. I hope you have given her a signed copy....  Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 2/23/2024 1:21:00 PM
What an exquisite tribute to your friend, Richard. Its lyrical prose effortlessly encapsulates the essence of an extraordinary, resolute, and regal lady. May you relish the enchantment of this evening, my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2024 4:46:00 PM
Much appreciated.
Date: 2/19/2024 9:22:00 PM
A lovely tribute poem to Valerie Thibadeaux, Rick. Well written and your imagery was vibrant. A sprinkling of alliteration was an added pleasure. Thanks for sharing your admiration of Valerie, for Black History Month. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2024 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Bill. :0)
Date: 2/18/2024 2:11:00 AM
What a lovely dedication to your friend Richard. I love these lines especially... She’s every true story that has ever been told If you try to confine her she’s impossible to hold Add your own chapter line and verse You are born from nobility quench your inner thirst Perfection doesn’t need to be rehearsed. So beautiful...Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2024 4:14:00 AM
You are sweet. Thanks so much.
Date: 2/12/2024 8:55:00 AM
Good one. I enjoyed reading your work today. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2024 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Sara. ;0)
Date: 2/12/2024 5:44:00 AM
The gals are bound to like this one Rick. I thought of Beyonce as I was reading but saw your dedication at the end
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/12/2024 8:20:00 AM
I can see that. Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Date: 2/10/2024 10:07:00 AM
Is it black history month there? We have it in October.. Excellent poem Richard..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2024 6:26:00 PM
Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Date: 2/9/2024 2:52:00 PM
a lovely tribute, Richard. It flows and captures the essence of a beautiful, strong, and noble woman. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2024 6:26:00 PM
You as well Sara. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 2/9/2024 11:06:00 AM
Chocolate, which I love but must fast due to glucose levels. Love your poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Victor.
Date: 2/9/2024 10:33:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Enjoy Black History month. Your poem is a genuine tribute to Chocolate.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2024 2:42:00 PM
Much appreciated.

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