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Mr. Ant who was feeling very dehydrated, walked to get some relief he anticipated, quenching his thirst he drank from the river, falling in was swept away cold and shivering, Lovely dove on overhead branch witnessed the scene, plucked off a leaf and dropped it into the stream, Mr. Ant exhausted tread water to the leaf craft, climbed aboard it smiling didn't think he would last, Eventually Mr. Ant sailed safely to the river bank, spying the designs of a bird catcher his heart quickly sank, with the catcher finishing touches on his trap twig nest, Mr. Ant bit him in the foot and the catcher threw down the rest, Whereupon the loud commotion alarmed the dove who shuddered, making her take to the air with quick grace and a flutter, with her returning after the bird catcher ran off leaving his clutter, the new friends thought "one good turn definitely deserves another." "The Ant and the Dove Fable" 2-24-17

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Date: 2/28/2017 8:46:00 PM
LOVE, LOVE this one Che !! Great rhythm and flow AND important lesson learned which applies to everyone and everything !! Thanx Che !! ~~Jeanie ~~
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/28/2017 8:50:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Jeanie! Thanks so much for very kind comment!~Che :)
Date: 2/26/2017 8:29:00 AM
I agree w/the other talented poetesses/poets. A very wise and imaginative poem. The theme of unity is so well expressed by you. Wonderful poetry. A 7 w/o question. Love has no limit.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/26/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Freddie! I appreciate it!~P & L~Che :)
Date: 2/24/2017 5:05:00 PM
Your fable is so imaginative and entertaining, too, Cheryl! I really enjoyed it! GL in the contest :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/24/2017 5:10:00 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment Laura! I decided to put my other farmer and the pig one in on it instead~Che :)
Date: 2/24/2017 7:18:00 AM
Very cute poem Cheryl. A fun read and nice message :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/24/2017 7:21:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for kind comment Heidi!~Che :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/24/2017 7:20:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for kind comment Chris!~Che :)
Date: 2/24/2017 7:11:00 AM
This was whimsical, fun and such a great message. I really enjoyed this Cheryl.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/24/2017 7:20:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for kind comment Chris!~Che

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