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F O R E V E R

Gulf breeze chime my chimes
What I say here pass it on
Spring fling beckoning.

Infatuation -
A cat chases its own tail
Love begins at home.

Elusive wind blows
Bliss is like falling in love
I claim nostalgia.

Wrapped kisses with rose
A lonely hunter shivers 
Love last a life time.

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Copyright © Iris E. Sankey- Lewis | Year Posted 2016

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Funom Makama Date: 2/16/2016 9:33:00 AM great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible. Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/16/2016 2:37:00 PM thank U dear funom. U so inspire.

Paul Callus Date: 2/9/2016 12:04:00 PM A delightful haiku string, although I have to admit I have a preference for the 3rd one! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/13/2016 8:39:00 AM I do 2 Paul. Thanks for visiting again.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/4/2016 10:31:00 AM Iris, thanks for the kind reply Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/3/2016 9:22:00 PM I love the elusive feel, you have a lovely way of making your readers see and feel the perfect imagery. Thanks for expressing the beauty of love. A perfect 7 for your haiku. LINDA Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/4/2016 8:44:00 AM Thanks dear one. Hugs.

D.W. Rodgers Date: 2/3/2016 7:04:00 PM A lovely nest Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/4/2016 8:45:00 AM I like that... lovelyness.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/2/2016 7:03:00 PM so nice of you to drop by I thought you might be interested in this, take a peek?http://www.graceguts.com/essays/haiku-checklist Light & Love Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/3/2016 6:45:00 PM Thank you Debbie. Checking.

Jan Allison Date: 2/2/2016 6:40:00 PM very beautiful string of haiku Iris:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/2/2016 6:47:00 PM Thank you Jan, as always; you inspire me. Have a lovely cozy evening dear one.

Skat A Date: 2/1/2016 2:39:00 PM Hi Iris, I live near the Gulf, the first haiku is my favorite. :) Love the forever feeling in every haiku. I shall rate this with a 7. In which I hardly give sevens on haiku. Thanks for the lovely haiku. SKAT Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/2/2016 6:39:00 AM And so you enjoy its breeze, like we do in Belize. Thank you dear one, always warm and inspiring.

Charles Henderson Date: 1/31/2016 8:54:00 PM infatuation: that's a classic, Goooood poem. Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/2/2016 6:45:00 AM Thank you Charles. had fun twiddling with all of it. Blessings dear one.

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/31/2016 5:30:00 PM Beautiful, I really loved the line "Love begins at home" Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 2/2/2016 6:46:00 AM Arthur, I am thankful for your warm visit.

White Sage Date: 1/31/2016 3:32:00 AM that's lovely, well penned Iris...excellent Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 1/31/2016 10:53:00 AM How are you, white sage? Right back visiting you.

Kuleza John Lembi Date: 1/29/2016 4:13:00 PM Great write Iris i like it so much Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 1/31/2016 10:55:00 AM Kuleza, thanks for visiting with kindness and warmth.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2016 3:25:00 PM - And ...... true love last forever, my friend - Great !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 1/31/2016 10:57:00 AM Hi Anne, having a cozy Sunday? Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 1/29/2016 3:33:00 PM Thank you dear one. I was amazed you're across continent.