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F Arts

Snuck out in secret Hit me like a runaway train Silent but violent *Yet Another Senryu Contest! (No 5/7/5 entries please!) Chris D. Aechtner Contest *

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2010 9:26:00 PM

hahaha!! Disqualified for the capitalization I bet; otherwise, I am sure it would have scored in his contest!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/22/2010 2:49:00 PM

That is hillarious!! i would love to get your book...is this the children's book?

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2010 2:17:00 AM

Typical Mrs oops meant Mr Hall write.. On second thought nothing about you is typical.. Thanks for the laughs this morning.. Best wishes, Wilma

Monica Evette

Date: 9/15/2010 5:17:00 PM

I love you sense of humor. Thank you for reading, commenting and liking my poems. I'm finding my words again and your words are VERY encouraging. :-) Monica

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2010 4:10:00 PM

lol oh this was a funny one, the second line ha ha, enjoyed this one..P.D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 4:07:00 PM

LOL Farts can be both silent and deadly. Very clever, Sidney! Love, Carolyn

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/15/2010 3:53:00 PM

Farts are always funny, best wishes for the contest, and may your aurora be a fragrant one.