Eyne

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From those eyne
  the sunshine
     beaming

  The sunshine
     beaming
from those eyne

     Beaming
from those eyne
  the sunshine

  From those
    beaming
    sunshine
    the eyne

passionfree verse

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Debbie Guzzi

January 3, 2011 at 12:46 PM

sounds like love..devilish me wants to say "beam me up scottie;)" Light & Love

Daver Austin

December 9, 2010 at 7:40 AM

Aye, aye, Sir James. These orbs definitely are free of glaucoma or cataracts. Devlishly clever thou art. Love, Dave

James Marshall Goff

December 8, 2010 at 6:54 PM

very cool flow of imagination, twisting upon itself to perfection in the last stanza! cool indeed! jimbo

Audrey Haick

December 8, 2010 at 11:46 AM

Awesome, James!!! Could this be a new form, you think? idk much about poetry forms, but this looks like it could be one! Check it out. Love, Audrey

Phyllis Babcock

December 6, 2010 at 9:39 PM

This is so cute. Working in our own store with eyeglasses for 18 years I seen all kinds of eyes. Expressive are those eyes. God Bless Phyl

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 9:38 PM

OOOH, this is one I really like, and say, I just saw a really old blog comment you made me on fritters. OH yes, the cod fritters sounds great. I bet it's like fish and chips!!!