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Eyewitness

The slow, murky, drought-affected river
Snakes its way around meandering shores.
Its surface littered with leaves upriver
Like colorful scales on a constrictor.
Within its gut swim impervious prey
That nourishes it along its lengthy
Journey to the sea. All along the way
Its subtle currents swallow whole, debris
Left in the wake of Octobers fury.
Unmindful Canada geese fly over
The leafy surface honking their carefree
Calls while negotiating their stopover.
Standing high on the bank is I, witness
To this autumn picturesque loveliness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2009 10:06:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Albert. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2009 4:02:00 AM
Nicely done with descriptiveness that takes one there. Keep writing. Sara
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