Eyes that Stop Time


The Serpentine road winds endlessly,
Adrenaline rushes in my body, passion fills my mind
Even if the road ends, the best is still ahead.
Everything paused when I first saw your eyes,
My heart races when we meet gazes
I admire poetry with adulation —  only with you.
 
Amber shades glisten in enchanting waves,
Your familiar gaze makes me fall for you
Butterflies flutter in my stomach exhilarated.
As I scribble your name on pieces of paper
When I meet other girls my mind returns to you
My nightmares revolve around the fear of losing you.

The stars glimmer in an ecstatic glow above us
I find you shining in the gleam of our twilight
Seasons may end and shift  but I am still me-
When our lips unite, I feel as if the galaxy is exploding
You say you love me most, and I can't control my feelings. 

The beating of your heart is so melodic
A tune that sends vibrations down my spine
Inside of you, is me, I am finally home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 2/6/2025 12:18:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for Sharing!
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Date: 1/31/2025 12:50:00 PM
A delicate expression of a romance that fires passion in "a tune that sends vibrations down my spine. Wonderfully expressed, Lasaad, as you find the home and life giving love you have searched for all your life. There is an overwhelming feel of loveliness in your words. Congratulations on your win, dear friend. Blessings of joy to you!
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Date: 1/19/2025 8:46:00 AM
"When our lips unite, I feel as if the galaxy is exploding You say you love me most, and I can't control my feelings." This poem of yours is a wonderful expression of bewitching love from start to finish. The all consuming flame of passion seems to have consumed you fully. Every word and every line articulates the passionate vibes that passes through your heart. Here, you have laid bare your deepest desires and longings. "Your familiar gaze makes me fall for you Butterflies flutter in my stomach exhilarated." Many young lovers can easily relate to this state of mind. Breathtaking poetry, dear Lasaad. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/16/2025 7:56:00 PM
Breathtaking poetry, Sotto - "Even if the road ends, the best is still ahead. Everything paused when I first saw your eyes,"
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Date: 1/16/2025 2:11:00 PM
Back with a congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Good to see it made the winners' list. Sara K
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Date: 1/16/2025 1:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sotto.
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Date: 1/16/2025 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for your entry Sotto!
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Date: 1/16/2025 12:34:00 PM
You're very welcome Craig, thanks for hosting the contest and for my placement.
Date: 1/16/2025 10:03:00 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely write you have here. Great Ending... "Good Luck" if for a contest... Have a fun day writing away..............
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:41:00 AM
Your poem delights with its imagery and metaphors, which are written in a very romantic style. Loved the last stanza. A real beauty.
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Date: 1/16/2025 5:59:00 AM
Its a very natural and sincere poem that depicts such inner most emotions in such an effortless manner, dear dr sotto, love and passion, and how infatuation is youv shown that through your word weaving: the fear of losing someone that means so much to one , i think many must have felt and experienced that emotion .. an emotive one this is and so well delivered also! Hope your week is going well: sending you light always! Pleasure reading your poem
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Date: 1/15/2025 8:01:00 AM
- To love is a strong feeling, a state that is deep and genuine - and feels like home... a beautiful poem, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 1/14/2025 12:41:00 PM
Sounds exactly like new love. How my crushes were too!!
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Date: 1/14/2025 11:12:00 AM
A beautiful love poem. My FAVE.
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Date: 1/14/2025 3:43:00 AM
Ahhh!! I wonder if for a contest. If so, Lasaad, it reads like a good contender to me. Such a nice love story. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 1/13/2025 5:21:00 PM
Lasaad this is such a Passionate, piece of meeting the one in a million perfect love. When reading it brought me back to the love of my life years ago that will always be treasured in my heart. The emotions and metaphors you used ignited my heart and brought me back to when I felt as you have written. These feelings are never lost or forgotten my friend. Reading this I know you have experienced such lovely and are very fortunate to do so. This one is a favorite my friend. Thank you for posting.
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