Eyes Peeled

My eyes were peeled back with fright
From below the awfully terrible sight
Now a bite from a nit
Hurt a tinny bit 
How many tinny bits will it hurt from croc a bite?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 11, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Way too many I'm thinking, lol! Good Luck in the contest-Great write!~Tirzah~
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