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Eyes Peeled

My eyes were peeled back with fright From below the awfully terrible sight Now a bite from a nit Hurt a tinny bit How many tinny bits will it hurt from croc a bite?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/11/2010 6:48:00 PM
Way too many I'm thinking, lol! Good Luck in the contest-Great write!~Tirzah~
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