Eyes opened

Yesterday, I dreamed.

I saw myself opening the door,
receiving your crooked flowers,
telling you somnambulant secrets,
and laughing at your nonsense silent

Then, I woke up.

The sun had not yet awakened,
and my heart seemed breathless.
Nervous, I forgot what I was saying.
I only remember that, before falling asleep again,
I could have let you dream my dream.
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June 16, 2026 at 8:30 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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