Eyes of My Heart

Eyes of my heart,
walking slowly toward me
dressed in crimson, 
your movements both awkward and 
choreographic,
distilled to an essence of intimacy  
in the echo chambers of the erotic,
an inviolate space of possibility,
joining one another in a zone 
deeper than breath.
It couldn’t be any other way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Well done Jack, enjoyed this romantic piece.
Jordan Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:47 PM
Thanks... I had a good time writing it.
Barton Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Beautiful very eloquent with words
Jordan Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Thanks for the comment. I enjoyed reading your pieces, and I'm very impressed with how many you posted on your first day. I look forward to reading more in the future. Jack
Jones Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 7:40 AM
This is beautiful Jack
Jordan Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Kind words... Thank you.
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