Eyes of An Angel

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I am Empty I was Lost I saw an Angel I lay Weeping I pray Inside I sleep Forever

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Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 10/18/2017 8:42:00 AM

short but truly heartfelt. The Angel statuette adds to the agonizing beauty of this piece. Wonderful write/wonderful read!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2017 2:42:00 PM

- Unique and great done, Arthur - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 9/14/2017 2:36:00 PM

Love the shaping my friend :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2017 5:15:00 AM

This is awesome Arthur! What a brilliantly laid out poem, with a grandiose message! I surely enjoyed reading your tremendous poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/10/2017 6:49:00 PM

You better wake up and cut the grass....it's getting awfully long.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 9:44:00 PM

LOL thanks Tim, I was sure you had done it for me!!!

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/10/2017 6:46:00 PM

maybe the angel said your time is not now..............Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/19/2017 9:44:00 PM

Thanks Seren, hugs!