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Eyes Gaze

When the sun cast pastel colors On the far eastern horizon Like kisses exchanged between lovers Drawing me as the scent of spring Lures the honeybee to come taste Notebook, pen, dictionary bring To porch, ears tuned, eyes gaze__no haste Sponsor: Carol Sunshine Brown Contest: Who, What, Where Form: Saraband(one tercet plus one quatrain) Rhyme Scheme:A,X,A...B,C,B,C The form not listed so put under Quatrain

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Date: 4/24/2013 8:36:00 PM
Hello Sara, Congratulations in Carol's awesome "WHO WHAT WHERE" ~Goodnight~ Linda
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Date: 4/24/2013 9:44:00 AM
Sara, I enjoyed this conjure of word and thought! RAY
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations Sara...I can just see you there....writing your beautiful poems..:-)
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:29:00 PM
Congrats Sara! Thank you for the comment on my write. :o) I really like the flow here...It brings beauty to the mind and soul.<3
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Date: 4/23/2013 6:15:00 PM
Congrats on your outstanding win Sara~A.O
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Date: 4/23/2013 1:49:00 PM
Congratulation on your win Sara, loved to read your poem. Love Terry
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Date: 3/25/2013 10:25:00 PM
This is perfect, Sara! Just beautiful! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/25/2013 8:29:00 PM
This is totally awesome my friend, you have pieced together a mighty poem here, so very delightful, peaceful, and wondrous! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! You have masterfully written this lovely poem, Great Work!!
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