Eyes Gaze

When the sun cast pastel colors
On the far eastern horizon
Like kisses exchanged between lovers
Drawing me as the scent of spring
Lures the honeybee to come taste
Notebook, pen, dictionary bring
To porch, ears tuned, eyes gaze__no haste  

Sponsor: Carol Sunshine Brown
Contest: Who, What, Where
Form: Saraband(one tercet plus one quatrain)
Rhyme Scheme:A,X,A...B,C,B,C
The form not listed so put under Quatrain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 24, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Hello Sara, Congratulations in Carol's awesome "WHO WHAT WHERE" ~Goodnight~ Linda
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April 24, 2013 at 9:44 AM
Sara, I enjoyed this conjure of word and thought! RAY
Jones Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations Sara...I can just see you there....writing your beautiful poems..:-)
Kearley Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 10:29 PM
Congrats Sara! Thank you for the comment on my write. :o) I really like the flow here...It brings beauty to the mind and soul.<3
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April 23, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Congrats on your outstanding win Sara~A.O
Bacha Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Congratulation on your win Sara, loved to read your poem. Love Terry
Haick Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 10:25 PM
This is perfect, Sara! Just beautiful! Love, Annalise
Sivey Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 8:29 PM
This is totally awesome my friend, you have pieced together a mighty poem here, so very delightful, peaceful, and wondrous! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! You have masterfully written this lovely poem, Great Work!!
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