Eyes Closed

Meditating to love silencing the mind of all thoughts having faith in one simple thing is indeed a test of endurance stretching muscles of the heart letting it be the guide to a possible future the truth is there beating next to your heart the answer lies in first love kiss a burning spark that stands strong against all trials is the one that true love seeks I can only think with my mind critical analysis is a cold cold place to be as my heart is not with me this warm cozy kind loving place is there fluttering beside yours do you not hear? the beating of my heart?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kimathi Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Hi Angeline. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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May 7, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Thank you for commenting. It's a delightful news to my ears to know that this poem made it to the Poetry Soup homepage. Thanks.
Mcdaid Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 1:27 PM
very beautifully painted romantic piece angeline excellent vision drawn from the deepest chambers
Haikutwinkle Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:44 AM
thank you liam beautiful comment
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