Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Eyes Closed

"Eyes Closed"

                " Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see"
                     Drawing conclusions without opening the book is wrong..
                        Only hearing the music and not the words of a song..
                                Finding love beyond the trees of the forest..
                          But in the end finding a place for my head to rest..                
                    Sometimes the pages stick together and we miss the theme.. 
                           Because in the end what we see in the mirror is not 
                                                    always as it seems..                       
                         


"Strawberry Fields" The Beatles
For Matt's music quote contest...

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Jack Horne August 23, 2011 at 12:41 PM I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown August 22, 2011 at 4:28 PM Congratulations on your placement in Chris' "Favorite Music Lyrics" contest . Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson August 22, 2011 at 11:26 AM Great writing and great win. Congratulations. Joyce

Nette Onclaud August 22, 2011 at 1:41 AM michael, this one knocks me out! so tender! . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 11:12 PM Congrats Michael on your fantastico win with these lyrics and special songs luv.. enjoy.. as your J.G. is so enjoying luv.. always...

David Williams August 21, 2011 at 6:15 PM hey Michael congrats on your win David

Constance La France July 14, 2011 at 12:29 PM I always loved the Beatles, I have a CD of Beatle songs that I love and the thing is the Beatles are not singing them, other singers are and it is amazing, I wish you the best in the contest, and thank you so much for your ever wonderful comments on my poetry, I so appreciate that~~

James Peranteau July 14, 2011 at 6:43 AM I've never aquired a taste for the Beatles Michael, (country and jazz) for me, since I was a lil' squirt ! Yet, this write of yours dear poet, is one which I can muse over. I think this write will go over well in Chris' contest ! Have a wonderful week sir ! Much love, james

Doris Culverhouse July 13, 2011 at 8:55 PM Enjoyed....is this the actual song?

Chris Matt July 13, 2011 at 2:21 PM Just wanted to say thanks for participating in my contest. And you chose a great song, love the Beatles. Thanks again. ~Chris

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2011 at 11:12 AM Enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Thank you for sharing and I will be back again soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

Juanita Warden July 13, 2011 at 11:05 AM Great write..good luck in the contest..

Wilma Neels July 13, 2011 at 10:37 AM Gosh, I love this Michael, I really do.. My best wishes to you for the contest as well.. Lfde Wilma

Caryl Muzzey July 13, 2011 at 10:06 AM A wonderful write and entry for the contest Michael. I have always been in love with "The Beatles". This should do very well in the contest~ Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2011 at 9:06 AM An stunning beauty Michael.. perfect song from a wonderful album from the most fantastic group on the Planet ever.. must check this contest out and get my music mojo on.. good luck my luv..this is brilliant beyond compare .. words rolling round in my head for a special poem for u but got side tracked with two contests so on back burner luv.. your Jersey Girl in poetry mode.. inspired by her White Knight..always and forever with luv..