Eyes

I see before me with my eyes A semblance of a sea swept shell And Love indentured with a pearl A heart shaped iris stares ahead Ralph Sergi Eyes June 14, 2015 Visual 4

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Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 10/27/2015 12:15:00 PM

simply wonderful poem beyond words..enjoyed its beauty ~7~ to my fav poet :) thank you ralph

Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/27/2015 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, Remnan: The poem was inspired by an illustration by the author's contest.

Gail Debole

Date: 10/14/2015 7:08:00 PM

Beautiful poem! Like your use of personification...Thanks for stopping by to ready my poem.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/4/2015 11:07:00 AM

Hi Inas: Nice to know you. Thanks for sharing .

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2015 4:33:00 PM

Ralph:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 3:51:00 PM

very nicely done, Ralph and I see you garnered a placement. BIG congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2015 3:42:00 PM

Ralph, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2015 2:43:00 PM

Lovely take on this eye visual, Ralph. Congratulations on your top win. // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/22/2015 2:19:00 AM

very good take Ralph congrats on win hugs

Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/22/2015 7:19:00 AM

Hi Shadow: Thank you for the comment.

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/21/2015 8:50:00 PM

lovely piece, congrats on your win

Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/22/2015 7:20:00 AM

Hi Francine: Thanks for the kind comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2015 3:20:00 PM

beautifully penned Ralph many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2015 11:04:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Ralph - Good luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/15/2015 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise for your comment.