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Eyes

I see before me with my eyes
A semblance of a sea swept shell
And Love indentured with a pearl
A heart shaped iris stares ahead

Ralph Sergi  Eyes

June 14, 2015 Visual 4

Copyright © Ralph Sergi | Year Posted 2015

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Punnia Viswan Bhatia

October 27, 2015 at 12:15 PM

simply wonderful poem beyond words..enjoyed its beauty ~7~ to my fav poet :) thank you ralph

October 27, 2015 at 1:18 PM

Thank you, Remnan: The poem was inspired by an illustration by the author's contest.

October 14, 2015 at 7:08 PM

Beautiful poem! Like your use of personification...Thanks for stopping by to ready my poem.

July 4, 2015 at 11:07 AM

Hi Inas: Nice to know you. Thanks for sharing .

June 22, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Ralph:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2015 at 3:51 PM

very nicely done, Ralph and I see you garnered a placement. BIG congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

June 22, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Ralph, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA

June 22, 2015 at 2:43 PM

Lovely take on this eye visual, Ralph. Congratulations on your top win. // paul

Shadow Hamilton

June 22, 2015 at 2:19 AM

very good take Ralph congrats on win hugs

June 22, 2015 at 7:19 AM

Hi Shadow: Thank you for the comment.

Francine Roberts

June 21, 2015 at 8:50 PM

lovely piece, congrats on your win

June 22, 2015 at 7:20 AM

Hi Francine: Thanks for the kind comment.

June 21, 2015 at 3:20 PM

beautifully penned Ralph many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 14, 2015 at 11:04 AM

- A lovely poem, Ralph - Good luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)

June 15, 2015 at 2:41 PM

Thank you Anne Lise for your comment.

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