Carolyn Devonshire Poet Free verse

Eyes

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Eyes
                Mesmerize
                                  Tantalize
                                                  Hypnotize

Engage us
                Invite us
                                  Provoke us
                                                   Excite us

Shed tears
                Reflect fears
                                  Shift gears
                                                   As passion nears

No blinking
                Keep thinking
                                  He's winking
                                                  My heart's sinking

Into his pools
Warm, brown
Eyes

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Roger Page June 6, 2010 at 10:03 PM You transfer your feelings to your reader so well. Love Roger

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen June 3, 2010 at 10:37 PM Carolyn, you have written such passion in the pool of warm, brown eyes. I love the format. Another enjoyable read. Love, Dane

Jayne Eggins June 3, 2010 at 8:10 AM Ohhhh I love the format of this one Carolyn I think you maybe have given me an idea with some concrete poetry thanks again for the reads its been a while since I was here just finding everyone again and finding old friends as well lol love Jayne

Joshua Lacey June 2, 2010 at 4:03 PM the eyes sure can be a puzzle! lol

Lynette Chachere May 30, 2010 at 3:34 PM this is really sweet when i read it that.eyes do mesmerize, especially if it's your love. i'll have to fav.i love anything with the eyes. take care, Carolyn.i hope you are well. and i wish for those brown eyes of his to never leave your way. -always

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 30, 2010 at 2:33 PM oh wow, this is such a creative write, Carolyn! I really enjoyed reading this, as well as the progression of your story in this one! goes to my faves ;) & thanks for your comments on my Even poem :) happy you enjoyed it :)

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2010 at 8:27 PM Carolyn, came here again to thank you for your blog comment and observations. I do want to blog someday about lay and lie, two of the most misused verbs in our language! How interesting that you also taught these things. Have a great weekend. Luv, Andra

Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C. May 29, 2010 at 7:41 PM THIS IS BRILLIANT CAROLYN. AND.LOL.IM NOT A DAY OLDER THAN 30. THAT WAS A JOKE. BUT THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS, IT MADE ME SMILE MORE THAN EVER. bUfFy

James Fraser May 29, 2010 at 4:50 PM Yummy poetry in it's finest >> James

John Freeman May 29, 2010 at 12:16 PM Cool Free verse Carolyn. Unique to what I see others writting. I am thinking of writing a few of theses myself. I will have to go study the form a bit more. Agape, Moses

Charmaine Chircop May 28, 2010 at 10:45 AM Carolyn those warm brown eyes,oolalla. .sensual poem..I love warm brown eyes too,lol,.tnks for yr comments dear. I feel you enamoured. .:)Charma

Sharon Tideswell May 28, 2010 at 9:48 AM Cool! Brilliant! Fantastic! Loved everything about it. Every word is perfect and the presentation is great, well done !

Gert W. Knop May 28, 2010 at 9:06 AM Lovely written Free verse and also in this shape, Carolyn! Thank you for your kind comments and have a nice weekend! Love, Gert

Joseph Spence Sr May 28, 2010 at 6:21 AM Awesome girl! Don't let him get away. I like the tone and essence of this poem. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

James Peranteau May 28, 2010 at 4:45 AM Such a soft and uplifting poem here Carolyn ! I have created in mine thoughts a beautiful stroll through a pretty park Carolyn and you hand in hand with the soul who has inspired this write...I feel your heart beating young lady ! You go girl ! james

Dr.Ram Mehta May 28, 2010 at 2:56 AM Quite a unique poem with nice rhyming, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak May 28, 2010 at 2:55 AM What a wonderful way to express those mesmerizing qualities of a person's deepest feature...Great write! Dan C

John Rhinem May 27, 2010 at 11:29 PM Smile! What are You doing up so late dear? Thank You for the mail also very kind! "Hello, Precious & Gifted Carolyne Devonshire!" ~ What a pretty and lovely poem this is here! You must be feeling that summer breeze blowing through Your heart it sounds like dear lady!? Smile, how very nice if it is true!? I hope that life is treating You wonderfully and, that Your Eyes are as bright as this beautiful write!! "My Love & Warmth To You Always," John! ~ Smile, "Bye Dear!":)

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2010 at 10:50 PM oooh, I do love warm brown eyes like pools. My first love had those! very nice. Luv, andrea