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Eyes

. Eyes Mesmerize Tantalize Hypnotize Engage us Invite us Provoke us Excite us Shed tears Reflect fears Shift gears As passion nears No blinking Keep thinking He's winking My heart's sinking Into his pools Warm, brown Eyes

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Roger Page

Date: 6/6/2010 10:03:00 PM

You transfer your feelings to your reader so well. Love Roger

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/3/2010 10:37:00 PM

Carolyn, you have written such passion in the pool of warm, brown eyes. I love the format. Another enjoyable read. Love, Dane

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/3/2010 8:10:00 AM

Ohhhh I love the format of this one Carolyn I think you maybe have given me an idea with some concrete poetry thanks again for the reads its been a while since I was here just finding everyone again and finding old friends as well lol love Jayne

Joshua Lacey

Date: 6/2/2010 4:03:00 PM

the eyes sure can be a puzzle! lol

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/30/2010 3:34:00 PM

this is really sweet when i read it that.eyes do mesmerize, especially if it's your love. i'll have to fav.i love anything with the eyes. take care, Carolyn.i hope you are well. and i wish for those brown eyes of his to never leave your way. -always

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2010 2:33:00 PM

oh wow, this is such a creative write, Carolyn! I really enjoyed reading this, as well as the progression of your story in this one! goes to my faves ;) & thanks for your comments on my Even poem :) happy you enjoyed it :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2010 8:27:00 PM

Carolyn, came here again to thank you for your blog comment and observations. I do want to blog someday about lay and lie, two of the most misused verbs in our language! How interesting that you also taught these things. Have a great weekend. Luv, Andra

Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 5/29/2010 7:41:00 PM

THIS IS BRILLIANT CAROLYN. AND.LOL.IM NOT A DAY OLDER THAN 30. THAT WAS A JOKE. BUT THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS, IT MADE ME SMILE MORE THAN EVER. bUfFy

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2010 4:50:00 PM

Yummy poetry in it's finest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 5/29/2010 12:16:00 PM

Cool Free verse Carolyn. Unique to what I see others writting. I am thinking of writing a few of theses myself. I will have to go study the form a bit more. Agape, Moses

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/28/2010 10:45:00 AM

Carolyn those warm brown eyes,oolalla. .sensual poem..I love warm brown eyes too,lol,.tnks for yr comments dear. I feel you enamoured. .:)Charma

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 5/28/2010 9:48:00 AM

Cool! Brilliant! Fantastic! Loved everything about it. Every word is perfect and the presentation is great, well done !

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/28/2010 9:06:00 AM

Lovely written Free verse and also in this shape, Carolyn! Thank you for your kind comments and have a nice weekend! Love, Gert

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/28/2010 6:21:00 AM

Awesome girl! Don't let him get away. I like the tone and essence of this poem. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

James Peranteau

Date: 5/28/2010 4:45:00 AM

Such a soft and uplifting poem here Carolyn ! I have created in mine thoughts a beautiful stroll through a pretty park Carolyn and you hand in hand with the soul who has inspired this write...I feel your heart beating young lady ! You go girl ! james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2010 2:56:00 AM

Quite a unique poem with nice rhyming, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/28/2010 2:55:00 AM

What a wonderful way to express those mesmerizing qualities of a person's deepest feature...Great write! Dan C

John Rhinem

Date: 5/27/2010 11:29:00 PM

Smile! What are You doing up so late dear? Thank You for the mail also very kind! "Hello, Precious & Gifted Carolyne Devonshire!" ~ What a pretty and lovely poem this is here! You must be feeling that summer breeze blowing through Your heart it sounds like dear lady!? Smile, how very nice if it is true!? I hope that life is treating You wonderfully and, that Your Eyes are as bright as this beautiful write!! "My Love & Warmth To You Always," John! ~ Smile, "Bye Dear!":)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2010 10:50:00 PM

oooh, I do love warm brown eyes like pools. My first love had those! very nice. Luv, andrea