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Eyelids

Hovering in blue. I heard from deepness beatings of your eyes. Halcyons, waves and the eyelids smashing me of the steep shore. Hovering in green From mountains I heard the rustle of your eyes. The firs, the grass and eyelids dancing over the world's dark circles Hovering in grey. Holding my heart with tree fingers on a rock and I heard the blinking of your eyes as well as my throb between sky and earth. I dont know if I steped away into blue, neither if I crushed by green. My sole of foot was grey like stone and wind and life and your eyes when are not blues or green.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 2:44:00 PM
There are many good texts. I'm already happy to be with you. I do not write for the applause. When you know why I write, I think I will not write. In the final two are Romanians. Means a lot to me Carol. Thank you for your wishes.
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Date: 8/3/2011 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Christi. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2011 3:07:00 PM
Constance, thank you very much too, for your opinion. With honest friendship.
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Date: 5/1/2011 2:58:00 PM
Carol, your assessments means a lot to me. I hope soon I will bring more poems. Best regards.
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Date: 5/1/2011 6:18:00 AM
Christi, congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week!~~
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Christi. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram Mehta!
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Christi
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Date: 4/15/2011 10:06:00 PM
Andrea, so that life... Thank you very much!
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:58:00 PM
christi, I enjoyed this one because my son and I have eyes that are not exactly blue or green and even can be called a little grey. This is a very unusual poem and I enjoyed the images!
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