Christi Monte Poet Free verse

Eyelids

Hovering in blue.
I heard from deepness beatings of your eyes.
Halcyons, waves and the eyelids
smashing me of the steep shore.


Hovering in green
From mountains I heard the rustle of your eyes.
The firs, the grass and eyelids
dancing over the world's dark circles

Hovering in grey.
Holding my heart with tree fingers on a rock
and I heard the blinking of your eyes
as well as my throb between
sky and earth.

I dont know if I steped away into blue,
neither if I crushed by green.

My sole of foot was grey

like stone
and wind
and life

and your eyes
when are not blues or green.

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Christi Monte August 3, 2011 at 2:44 PM There are many good texts. I'm already happy to be with you. I do not write for the applause. When you know why I write, I think I will not write. In the final two are Romanians. Means a lot to me Carol. Thank you for your wishes.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 3, 2011 at 2:22 PM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Christi. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Christi Monte May 1, 2011 at 3:07 PM Constance, thank you very much too, for your opinion. With honest friendship.

Christi Monte May 1, 2011 at 2:58 PM Carol, your assessments means a lot to me. I hope soon I will bring more poems. Best regards.

Constance La France May 1, 2011 at 6:18 AM Christi, congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week!~~

Carol Sunshine Brown April 27, 2011 at 6:06 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Christi. Love, Carol

Christi Monte April 25, 2011 at 9:57 AM Thank you, Dr. Ram Mehta!

Dr.Ram Mehta April 25, 2011 at 8:19 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Christi

Christi Monte April 15, 2011 at 10:06 PM Andrea, so that life... Thank you very much!

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2011 at 7:58 PM christi, I enjoyed this one because my son and I have eyes that are not exactly blue or green and even can be called a little grey. This is a very unusual poem and I enjoyed the images!