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Sad Clown | Scary For Kids

blind ...
you must be
completely ...
one person, THE person
who loves you more
than any other has or could ...
right in front of you
making a fool of himself
no care for the laughter of those
who find his adoration of you
and all you are
the height of absurdity
their echoes rattle his maudlin marrow
and crimp his hollow heart ...
just a jester
cajoled by the callous
a horrid harlequin ...
dancing a jig of jaded jocularity
stomping on your careless concern
with lost, fallow feet
your soul's barren soil, unseeded
his blood and bone and bile
the cold casualty
of two lips pressed tender in pity ...
the wretched ruin of
a kiss.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Strand Completely New (4) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/4/2020 4:24:00 PM
Congrats G, you got a top win in Brian's contest woohoo!!
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:01:00 AM
Beautifully crafted, Gregory. Congrats on your top win. Superbly done.
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Date: 7/4/2020 7:35:00 AM
I’m with John! Lol congrats Gregory on a top win!;)
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Date: 7/1/2020 9:29:00 PM
Very touching G, so sad when love is unrequited, very fitting a clown, a jester dancing a jig of jaded jocularity, i don't think that's ever been written before...but you always find a way to stand out with your phrasing. Sorry you missed my songwriting contest.
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