Eye Socket Ball

Grating dry bone gyrations bend perception in Grand Hall
Mirrored gilt adornment reflects danced audacity wall to wall
Skeletons twisted manoeuvres conducive with talents tall
Spotlights radiate through ribcages, display spine curled gall

Cabaret kicks, garish grins combine Can - Can spectacle
Enthused leg lifts see renegade toe bone thrown as marble 
Audience shock for fox trotting flesh rotted fiends appall
Serves vigour of skeletal skin shaken windmill limb enthrall




24th October 2020

Written for Contest : Eight Creepy Lines
Sponsor:  Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 12:43 PM
What a great combination of "dem bones" images dancing at a "ball" - a monster mash maybe! Really well crafted and extremely creative, Sigrid. Congratulations on your "spooky" win!
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 11:54 AM
- SCARY ... - Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Sigrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Sigrid, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
Kitchin Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Sigrid, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky tale!
Ermine Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Thank you, Tania. - Good news!! Ta for hosting it.!
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 2:14 PM
This sure is grisly, Sigrid. What a display of language-laden 'spookocity!' Superb contest entry. Good luck! ~ Shaken in Chicago
Ermine Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Bare bone shaking in Chicago! Love that! Thanks, spooked Gershon!
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:16 PM
A great entry to the contest, Sigrid!! Your skillful wordplay doubles listeners' fear!!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 4:31 AM
You certainly made my goosebumps rise with such creepy imagery. good luck in the contest Sigrid:-) hugs jan xx
Ermine Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Thanks, Jan... More humour.than creep, but it's what came out! Ta for stopping in.
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