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Eye See the Day

Nights have been dark Days have been dim My vision became apart, Of the poisoned root & blemishing stem Now the wool has set And I can finally be A radiant child to God’s eyes Because there’s a brighter day I can see I see a vast season of bliss Sunlight of new growth Old attitudes will whither Rain of new seeds will soak Clouds of pain will migrate For I now see the sky New life soars through my heart All peril life is sure to die No longer am I blind To what God has in store for me I shall receive with sincerity And look forward to the day I see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/23/2016 5:36:00 PM
Wonderfully "received with sincerity". Thank you for sharing, enjoying your pieces. W
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Date: 8/17/2016 10:18:00 PM
Hi Brandon, This is a good debut poem. Also I would like to say welcome to poetry soup. This is a place where you can learn and grow from other poets like you. It's also a place to meet new friends. When you have some time you more than welcome to stop by my page: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:01:00 AM
Nise One ,Brandon , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 8/12/2016 12:59:00 PM
- Brandon, a lovely poem - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 8/12/2016 10:11:00 AM
Brandon Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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