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Eye Poems

Eye poems displaying a shapely form, exempting audition from needless stress. The challenge with the tetractys form is that each line is required 'to stand on its own ' and yet it the poem is to express a complete thought,within the narrow compass of 20 syllables.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 10/18/2008 10:47:00 AM
Another style I have to attempt - Tetractys. Would you believe it took me four days to write the Fulton for your contest! LOL! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Wonderfully penned! Peace always, John
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Date: 10/18/2008 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Regards Heidie
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Date: 10/17/2008 12:54:00 PM
Brian Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:26:00 PM
Brian great job on this short piece - Congrats on being featured - great job & God Bless always
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Date: 10/14/2008 7:14:00 PM
Now, I know you're not tired of writing, Brian ... LOL ... "exempting from needless stress" indeed, and so much easier to pen ... sometimes ... smile ... nice little ditty featured this week ... congratulations!!
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Date: 10/14/2008 3:42:00 AM
Here, here, and there is alot of stress to release! Congrats on your feature, and thanks for noticing me on SB - I was so excited!!! Love Kristin
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Date: 10/13/2008 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations to you for the featured poem. I continue to learn from you! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2008 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on "Eye Poems" being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 10/13/2008 5:18:00 AM
Wow Brian. You can conquer any form so beautifully. Congratulations on being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/12/2008 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured Brian! I've never tried this type of poem, it's wonderful! ~Trudy~
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