-eye Bags and Heart Madness-

her legs unending she was wearing a mini her crimson red lips his heart pounding rapidly her eye bags slowed his heart rate
*Missy Nikko's "weird" body part of choice eye bags, combined with Carolyn's body part of choice the heart :) * 20/04/2011
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Brown Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Wilma. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Interesting work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 12:15 AM
hahaha. I love this one. Those eyebags can be real downers!!!
Devonshire Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 10:56 AM
HA HA!!! I love the footnote and the poem is a riot! You should enter this in Francine's contest, if you haven't already entered. You gave me a great laugh! Thank you, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn (Want to write a poem about my hammer toes? Kidding of course)
Rutherford Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:51 AM
Original and well thought out Wilma !Anne
Poet Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:31 AM
......and the heart is still pounding!!!
Poet Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:17 AM
I like eye bags!!!
K. Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 1:52 AM
hugs hugs hugssssss ^_^
K. Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 1:51 AM
oh whooosh-- there ya go, eye bags what a turn off eh? silly guy for not realizing he is the main reason for those eye bags though?? tossing & turning for this guy & look what he does?? haha! but super kudos to you for running away (in your mile-long legs) with this write-- see no challenge is too hard for you? this is a cool write on eye bags & heart! haha you want me to go back to the nose? nose hair ^_^ I am serious!!
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