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extinguished flower

the ember glows then lifts free from the fire extinguished flower

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 1:10:00 PM
Now to be like "Dust in the Wind" fine Haiku Deb. How are you, long time no see....:)
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Date: 2/14/2011 2:31:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Enjoyed..Reminds me of winters of long ago..Sara
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:23:00 AM
written with such aplomb; my senses reeling, deb... masterful! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:42:00 AM
Intensely beautiful Haiku Deb and so full of great images of the extinguished flower.. enjoy my friend and a very Happy Valentine's Day to u ....luv..
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Date: 2/14/2011 3:49:00 AM
Spare the embers today and fill your heart with the love of flowers. Happy Valentine's Day, Deb. Nice to see you posting again. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:58:00 PM
Interesting haiku entry. Sometimes flowers can be compared to open flames.
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:17:00 PM
beautiful pen picture of the dead flower
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Date: 2/13/2011 3:20:00 PM
Such an image, a dying love metaphor, I presume. Cool, Deb.
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:44:00 PM
Beautiful Deb my dear... pure true poetry at its best...luv Michael
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