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Exquisite Pain and Joy

There is exquisite pain In being offered a beautiful gift Fine the wrapping The bows beautifully beguiling The attached card: Love’s testament in writing Everything indicates The contents are perfect What lies inside Can satisfy, electrify, gratify…. BEAUTIFY, yes, beautify your life Wrapped up in pretty paper The outside tantalizes Alluring me to open Open…Open…OPEN! Yet…. I sit and stare At the beauty before me Thinking...rationalizing... Nothing lasts forever NOTHING Were the gift to be handled and fondled It might lose its newness Its mystic Its beauty It might get...old And so The gift sits there Unopened But there is exquisite joy in knowing In there beats a heart for you Strong and true Experiences fresh and new When you are stronger You will pull that pretty blue bow Yet for now... it’s good to know the gift remains waiting... The gift is for you Eileen Manassian

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Nudershada Cabanes

Date: 10/1/2014 2:57:00 AM

Delightful poem Eileen.the gift brings anticipation and excitement to the recipient but these feelings don't last. The spell is broken when the gift is opened but the thought, the care and the heart that comes with the gift lasts. Enjoy the gifts wrap or unwrap

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/20/2014 4:29:00 PM

This is very beautiful Eileen, I was gonna put a bow on and wrap myself up in a box, but if you dont open me, I might suffocate!!!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/20/2014 8:31:00 AM

I myself am a lover of anticipation...and even more I believe in it. But one does not stop there; it is a build up that leads to full satisfaction ... the gift is there to be enjoyed. Avail yourself of it....some gifts do have the power of renewal! hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Paul...I adore pretty gifts...simple things that carry the heart of the giver touch me deeply. Words...my favorite types of gifts. A person can gift himself. SO much to think and ponder on. There are many considerations to accepting a gift....strings attached, perhaps? Thanks for your comment. Good to be in touch again.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/20/2014 8:10:00 AM

Enjoy the paper the bow, the anticipation and mostly the love that would cause the person to take the time to express their love in such a special way. Store the memory and feeling away in your heart so that you can reopen that gift over and over again. By saving it you rob the person of their anticipation, they wish for your joy.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 8:41:00 AM

Thank you for your insight into this, Richard. Very deep and thoughtful. Good to have your view on this write, my dear.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/20/2014 7:13:00 AM

very beautifully penned piece eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 8:38:00 AM

:) Liam...you honor me.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/20/2014 4:52:00 AM

You came back from Cyprus and brought the sun with you! You came back, fresh, invigorated and inspired! What a gift for us all as we are going to wait the opening of the box with all the beautiful poems you have in store for us! Welcome back, dear Eileen! Wonderful writing!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 8:36:00 AM

Gia sou, Demetri mou. :) Nai...ksana ertha gia na grapso! Pos esai? Lovely to SEE you again, my dear. Thank you for your sweet sweet post. Glika enai...opos panta. Filakia

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/20/2014 1:24:00 AM

A gift of honest love remains always new in it's passion for you...such a pretty poem of enthrallment Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 3:55:00 AM

You understand the heart of this poem, Justin. Newness is captivating. Gifts of love are enthralling, indeed. One must savor the gift as long a possible....as well as the heart of the giver.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/19/2014 4:09:00 PM

Eileen I love the metaphor here...I would open your gift every night.....hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 3:55:00 AM

What a lovely post, Tim. :) It warms my heart. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2014 4:04:00 PM

- Gift given with love ..... but, maybe it's a completely different love you need - Great writing, my friend Eileen - Happy weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 3:56:00 AM

Questions abound, my sweet Sunshine! Thanks for your lovely visit today. Hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/19/2014 2:55:00 PM

oh, this is so true! the anticipation of joy is sometimes better than the real thing. great poem, eileen!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 3:57:00 AM

Beautiful post from you, Ilene. I've been on holiday. Back now. Will visit you soon.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2014 2:46:00 PM

Eileen,this is a mellow, grand piece endowed with a sense of romantic mysticism and magic... love it.. huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 3:57:00 AM

Thanks, Nette. Nice to have this visit and encouraging post from you. Hugs