Exquisite Love Grasping Hands

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The eye-to-eye association flick life away. Pretty natural tones ring out in my flyway Light, invisible hands bait me to the clay. It's excessively captivating of a grasp to assay. Blissful lyrics led me to find my way to an archway. I heard a sublime newly birth beat straightaway. This soft, serene sparkle enlightens my allay. Light stream is drawing me closer, yet I'm splay. Bright rays awe me as I convey a lovely hallway. My body, then again, lies on the chilly, acrid clay. It feels incredible to be released of such a weigh I was bare and defenseless, alike a newborn aweigh. Steady heartbeats draw me near my doorway.  Once I hand up control to virtue, I can utterly inlay Still, I'm alive, and I enjoyed doing it anyway. I can't ponder anything when I stare at the Milky Way. A dyed eye-to-eye correlation feature is held at bay. Why should we fear death? Because of doomsday. All were created by God, the sole crucial soothsay. We are all born to die, thus is no need to yell or dismay.
1st Place contest winner. Written: August 16, 2021 Your Best Monorhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 8/21/2021 4:13:00 PM
You show the beauty and peace of the heavens in such a lovely light here, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/21/2021 4:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle; your sweet words are so motivating. Have a blessed evening.
Date: 8/20/2021 9:21:00 PM
Some dwell on the matter, and others dismiss it. Methinks its best to enjoy the moments as it occasions us. Blessings, Lasaad, for sharing your thought-provoking talents, Aloha!
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Date: 8/21/2021 5:35:00 AM
Thank you very much, William. For your placement and comments on my poem, and thanks for your profound and great contest.
Date: 8/18/2021 2:44:00 AM
A marvelous monorhyme poem, I am frankly blown away by it and a bit sorry that I entered the same contest.
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Date: 8/18/2021 7:17:00 AM
I appreciate your kind words, Caren. Have a blessed day.
Date: 8/17/2021 11:41:00 PM
Quote: I can't ponder anything when I stare at the Milky Way....Lovely line, the universe takes our breath away. This is a perfect state of mind way beyond earthy concerns and turmoil...Nice one Lasaad....Delice
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Date: 8/18/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much, Delice; your words of wisdom are so motivating to me. Have a blessed day
Date: 8/17/2021 5:34:00 AM
Your monorhymes painted your vision boldly, Lasaad. True--it's good to live life in harmony --life is short.
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Date: 8/17/2021 6:17:00 AM
You are right, dear Vijay, life is really brief, and I think it does not account for all the global turmoil. Thank you for your insightful comment. My warmest regards
Date: 8/17/2021 2:44:00 AM
I would agree with you, but we are all afraid of death because it has an element of the unknown.
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Date: 8/17/2021 5:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor, thanks for you great feedback, I know that unknown part is beyond all of us. Blessings
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