Expressive Place - Tanka Contest

An expressive place A dark forest late at night Just a torch to see The path badly overgrown Looks hopeless yet is calming
Entrant into Black Eyed Susan's "Tanka" contest 12/8/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 8:39 PM
I can see it from your description!
Horne Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:47 AM
love this, my friend
West Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 11:08 PM
Hi Russell, really a great Tanka. Good luck in the contest. Rollo
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