Express-
This is a collaboration: this first part is written by my good friend David Washington and my
response is the second part.
BIG DAVE
Want something you cant have
But its right in front of your face
You wanna throw yourself out there
But you dunno If it’s your place
It could be a watch chain car or face
Its something so deep
When you look in to their eyes
It coats your heart
And takes you by surprise
And like warm yeast your feelings start to rise
But your feelings you want to express you try to disguise
Go with the flow is the life motto
Take control of your life like standard not auto
The trail of love you must follow
Don’t lose your path
Wash away the bad feeling and thoughts like a bath
I know things may get complicated like your last year of math
And because of all these thoughts you may get into a jealous wrath
But calm down its all good
Just remember that you should
Always go for the gold nothing less
Because she may be the thing that keeps your heart pumpin through your chest
MRS.SMITH
Too scared to say what im feeling
Scared of the hand you may be dealin
But your love sounds so appealing
Cant afford to be misunderstood
But don’t worry baby its all good
Ima try to be your girl
Change your world
Give you mine
Two hearts combine
So now I resign
From this single life I know
Cause now its time to show
Let go
Of all the hurt and woe
Cause baby its time you know
You had me at hello
Copyright © Ashley Smith | Year Posted 2009
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