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Abreast in tank top Seeds deflower battle myths Red lace lingerie Under shadow of turret Flowing combat above doubt Garland of poppies Sword unsheathed for wild conquest Guns orange roses Heavy metal for comfort White flag intimate cover Make love and not war Coronet for a bouquet Tiara of peace Sweet surrender in motion Wreaths for a renegade cause 18th February 2020 Contest Let the Pens Flow Tanka Poetry Sponsored by Jenish Somadas Syllables checked howmanysyllable.com Traditionally a tanka does not have a title, but I have to give one to submit the poem. I hope that Exposure enhances more than it may distract.

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Date: 3/19/2020 10:34:00 PM
An enjoyable read
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Date: 2/23/2020 5:18:00 AM
Scorching. I particularly like the pairing of Red Lace Lingerie and Garland of Poppies, a vision strung with bullets and revolutionary blood, read. The entire composition of words evokes revolution. Entire poem is a winner. On some far away beach, baby's on fire and eno is nodding to fripp.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/25/2020 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Lady Labyrinth.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/23/2020 5:19:00 AM
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Date: 2/18/2020 1:54:00 PM
- Really excellent written, Kai :) - Red lace lingerie ... will do good in the contest ... :)) - good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2020 7:41:00 AM
Very interesting backdrop for a passionate encounter. Good luck in the contest. Thanks as well for your visit.
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