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Exposed With Two Lenses

I was a child of only seven years,
adventurous, bold, I had no fears.
Into the woods I would go
after my Mom told me "No."
But worth the spanking and the tears.

These days the woods are worrisome,
fear I may trip and land on my bum.
Things live there I didn't see
when I was young and carefree.
With age, it's to caution I have succumb.


   { { { February 14th, 2016 } } }
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Kroll Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 9:49 AM
A great read. You summed up It up so well. I will bring this poem to mind when fear threatens to narrow my life. Thx for the look through two lenses. Kathy
Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
Lane Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Thank you, Sara. It was a fun contest and a pleasure to write for you.
Garg Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Agreed, things change and they must be accepted... Congratulations Lin.
Lane Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Thank you very much, Archana. ;)
Tagore Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Lovely Limericks and very true... Hugs, Bobby
Lane Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:02 AM
Thanks, Bobby. I appreciate the compliment and the hugs.
Gupta Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:21 AM
The contrast has been brought out beautifully. Congratulations...
Lane Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Thank you very much, Probir.
Haight Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Yes, Lin...we have all been there done that...now we succumb to the price of maturity. I like how you imaged your 'two lenses'. Congrats on your win.
Lane Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I had to use a telephoto lens to focus on 'way back when.' LOL
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading.
Lane Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Thanks so much.
Babbit Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Nice but never give up that childlike curiousity, it's worth that step. DMB
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 3:19 PM
I'm still curious, maybe even more so. Thanks, DMB.
Sage Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 6:07 PM
yeah, being a kid, we're simple, we would believe any wonderful story, but any horrific one will only get us scared but we won't so much believe, that's we kids for you, only knows positive rather to negatives, better than adults, because at that stage the brain only calculate and comprehend the negatives...i wonder how that teary face would look like (i mean when you're young) lol...that's one well penned poem there, best of luck in the contest
Lane Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:16 AM
Thanks for your thoughts, Sage.
Turner Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Great write, Lin. I'm still working on mine. Good luck:)
Lane Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Thanks, Danny. I'm sure it will be a good one.
Godwin Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Good job, Lin. I still love the woods and remember my 7 year old love of them - I think I would freak at night though. While thinking of this contest, I realized I still love most everything I did as a child, so I am still mind-searching. Yours makes me feel nostalgic as I'm certain the other entries will and I enjoyed it ... CayCay
Lane Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 9:05 AM
I was such a Tom-boy, but to tell you a secret ~ I'm not afraid of the woods. I'd march right in there today! lol I'm happy to have brought back good memories for you, CayCay. Thanks.
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