James Inman Poet Couplet

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Crystalline kisses from soft silken lips, 
          as, naked are the tears from my eyes, my love drips.

This promise I make with dreams only of you, 
          my heart I give          open, unselfish and true.

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Chris Hagy August 17, 2016 at 12:41 PM Just dropped by to visit an older write...beautiful!...we should all be so true with our love James Inman September 10, 2016 at 8:46 AM Chris, sorry I missed your beautiful comment. Thank you for visiting.

Skat A December 16, 2015 at 12:42 AM James, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT** James Inman December 16, 2015 at 7:06 AM Thank you.

Teddy Kimathi December 15, 2015 at 7:14 AM Greetings James. Congrats for the #1 placement of your beautiful verse! ;-) James Inman December 15, 2015 at 9:46 AM Hi Teddy, thank you for dropping by and nice comment.

Susan Gentry December 14, 2015 at 6:39 PM Congrats on #1 contest winner. Eloquent. James Inman December 15, 2015 at 9:45 AM Eloquent is such a wonderful word, thank you Susan.

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2015 at 6:23 PM you are a gorgeous romantic writer, Ralph. BIG congrats on this one. I had not even seen it!! James Inman December 15, 2015 at 9:44 AM Thank you Andrea.

David Mohn December 14, 2015 at 6:22 PM Beautifully paced and nuanced James…big congrats James Inman December 15, 2015 at 9:42 AM Thanks for the thoughtful comment, David.

Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 3:37 PM Four fabulous Lines James many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx James Inman December 14, 2015 at 4:21 PM Thanks Jan

Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 14, 2015 at 10:14 AM lovely...congrats on the win James :) James Inman December 14, 2015 at 11:16 AM Thank you RSSE.

Alexis Y. December 14, 2015 at 9:57 AM James , I see why you got the top spot with this write. Congrats on your top win in the "bid on my love" contest it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7 James Inman December 14, 2015 at 11:15 AM Wonderful comment, Alexis, thank you.

John Hamilton December 14, 2015 at 9:50 AM Congrats on your win well deserved. James Inman December 14, 2015 at 11:13 AM Thanks John.

Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 9:46 AM That's some offer you're making, James. Any takers yet? Congratulations! James Inman December 14, 2015 at 11:13 AM Lol, only one, my wife. Thank you Lin.

Balveen Cheema December 14, 2015 at 9:36 AM Lovely couplets! Congrats on your first placement James! James Inman December 14, 2015 at 11:10 AM Thanks for the nice comment, Balveen.

Sandra Haight December 14, 2015 at 8:36 AM Beautiful lines, James. Congratulations on your very top of the podium First Place win! 7, Sandra James Inman December 14, 2015 at 11:09 AM Thank you Sandra.

Eve Roper December 14, 2015 at 7:36 AM You won my heart with this one, James! Congratulations on a a beautiful win! James Inman December 14, 2015 at 11:08 AM Thank you Eve, I'm smiling.