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Crystalline kisses from soft silken lips, as, naked are the tears from my eyes, my love drips. This promise I make with dreams only of you, my heart I give open, unselfish and true.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/17/2016 12:41:00 PM
Just dropped by to visit an older write...beautiful!...we should all be so true with our love
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James Inman
Date: 9/10/2016 8:46:00 AM
Chris, sorry I missed your beautiful comment. Thank you for visiting.
Date: 12/16/2015 12:42:00 AM
James, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**
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James Inman
Date: 12/16/2015 7:06:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/15/2015 7:14:00 AM
Greetings James. Congrats for the #1 placement of your beautiful verse! ;-)
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James Inman
Date: 12/15/2015 9:46:00 AM
Hi Teddy, thank you for dropping by and nice comment.
Date: 12/14/2015 6:39:00 PM
Congrats on #1 contest winner. Eloquent.
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James Inman
Date: 12/15/2015 9:45:00 AM
Eloquent is such a wonderful word, thank you Susan.
Date: 12/14/2015 6:23:00 PM
you are a gorgeous romantic writer, Ralph. BIG congrats on this one. I had not even seen it!!
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James Inman
Date: 12/15/2015 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 12/14/2015 6:22:00 PM
Beautifully paced and nuanced James…big congrats
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James Inman
Date: 12/15/2015 9:42:00 AM
Thanks for the thoughtful comment, David.
Date: 12/14/2015 3:37:00 PM
Four fabulous Lines James many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 12/14/2015 10:14:00 AM
lovely...congrats on the win James :)
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thank you RSSE.
Date: 12/14/2015 9:57:00 AM
James , I see why you got the top spot with this write. Congrats on your top win in the "bid on my love" contest it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 11:15:00 AM
Wonderful comment, Alexis, thank you.
Date: 12/14/2015 9:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win well deserved.
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thanks John.
Date: 12/14/2015 9:46:00 AM
That's some offer you're making, James. Any takers yet? Congratulations!
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 11:13:00 AM
Lol, only one, my wife. Thank you Lin.
Date: 12/14/2015 9:36:00 AM
Lovely couplets! Congrats on your first placement James!
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 11:10:00 AM
Thanks for the nice comment, Balveen.
Date: 12/14/2015 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful lines, James. Congratulations on your very top of the podium First Place win! 7, Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 12/14/2015 7:36:00 AM
You won my heart with this one, James! Congratulations on a a beautiful win!
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James Inman
Date: 12/14/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Eve, I'm smiling.

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