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Explosively Sweet and Spontaneous

What can I say, how can I say it? I know, but I know not much I remember, but I remember not all I wasn’t confused only engrossed I didn’t go mental just intoxicated a delusional reality and practical evidence not believed yet, too delicious to simply forget and ignore. The staged madness, acted fight the dirty talks, voracious confrontations the tearing of clothes, rushing of body parts the intensity’s stampede and lustful acceleration combine to create a ring of fire accepting the action of an erotic volcano. The mind is still in shock and words stuck in a hanging elevator. aggression hardly mingles with sweetness raging fire not a familiarity to beauty but reverse is the case in such a master class as the whole of nature stands still to prepare the honours of our sexual manifestations. Creating air squeezing sounds from my lips on her meaty flesh from toe to knee in a famished fashion while my hands plough her thighs way up to her chest’s body guards propagate deep mourns of her susceptible acceptance transferred to the curiosity of my weapon. and the majesty of such an erotic presence is added by the oily friction of both skins. All muscles in their hundreds are at work it’s incomprehensible to know the brain isn’t in command all charges are at their peak iIt’s unimaginable to know the electricity wasn’t felt climax is reached, sweat and panting noticed but are well deserved awards of a sweet play governed by the rules of violence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/24/2015 2:33:00 PM
Very intense and powerful description of the explosive nature of raw sex and deep indulgence. To the point of almost being savage in seeking the end prize. A7
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:27:00 AM
You've said more.. Thanks Lindley
Date: 12/24/2015 9:36:00 AM
Hmmm...this is raw and truthful to some degree. I like the line "it's incomprehensible to know the brain isn't in command..." I believe this is true of certain intensities of pleasure, but few humans are even aware of it, much less have the capacity to understand it as you have. Well done. Thank you for reading my translation of Martial's poem. Best to you. / M
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:27:00 AM
You've said more.. Thanks Rigoler

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