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Explosive Is the Heart

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My heart explodes, shattering to infinity… and thus the pieces fall on lonely roads, crumbs of affinity… with fragments of my heart dispersed through endless time, futile falling fractions from a cascading climb, forming words of rhythm and rhyme… a shredded scattered soul standing at the crossroads. June.10.2019 Writing Challenge, Crumbling Rhyme Sponsored by: Dear Heart Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Constance La France

Date: 6/30/2019 4:09:00 PM

John , congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent write, I love the image and the audio is amazing. Sorry for my delay in visiting.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2019 7:05:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/25/2019 8:13:00 PM

My wonderful bro bro, your potent pen strikes with powerful emotional imagery. Such dramatic poignancy.. the Unicorns are in tears.. ;) Congratulations on your excellent win, you make your lil sissy proud. Warmest wishes and Unicorn tears.. ~ your sane sis, Illum <3

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/25/2019 4:21:00 PM

Congratulations! Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2019 11:48:00 AM

Excellent and so well read, Winged Warrior. Congrats to you.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/11/2019 10:35:00 AM

This is wonderful...good luck in the contest. Powerfully penned. Jeanne

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/11/2019 10:06:00 AM

Deep powerful write ^WW^ - a sure win I would predict - a heart is always free to pick and choose, but is the brain able to? Have faved this poem! Hugs, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/10/2019 11:47:00 PM

Hello WW … the heart can control our destiny as long as the head falls into line - thank you WW for your fine verse - Lindsay

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/10/2019 10:35:00 PM

Bro bro sounds like a bad case of heartburn!;) just joking! Lol wonderfully written! Glad to hear from you! Little puff is great and yes burning the house down!;)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/10/2019 5:44:00 PM

Nicely phrased. Good luck in the writing challenge. Jeanne

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2019 3:29:00 PM

beautifully penned ^WW^ good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/10/2019 3:03:00 PM

Excellent! A FAV. Well done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2019 1:03:00 PM

- The heart takes many choices in life ... lovely written, W.W. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)