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              My heart explodes,
        shattering to infinity…
      and thus the pieces fall on lonely roads,
        crumbs of affinity…
  with fragments of my heart dispersed through endless time,
  futile falling fractions from a cascading climb,
    forming words of rhythm and rhyme…
  a shredded scattered soul standing at the crossroads.






              June.10.2019
         Writing Challenge, 
       Crumbling Rhyme
          Sponsored by: Dear Heart 


Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Date: 6/30/2019 4:09:00 PM
John , congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent write, I love the image and the audio is amazing. Sorry for my delay in visiting.
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Date: 6/29/2019 7:05:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2019 8:13:00 PM
My wonderful bro bro, your potent pen strikes with powerful emotional imagery. Such dramatic poignancy.. the Unicorns are in tears.. ;) Congratulations on your excellent win, you make your lil sissy proud. Warmest wishes and Unicorn tears.. ~ your sane sis, Illum <3
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Date: 6/25/2019 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations! Well done.
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Date: 6/25/2019 11:48:00 AM
Excellent and so well read, Winged Warrior. Congrats to you.
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Date: 6/11/2019 10:35:00 AM
This is wonderful...good luck in the contest. Powerfully penned. Jeanne
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Date: 6/11/2019 10:06:00 AM
Deep powerful write ^WW^ - a sure win I would predict - a heart is always free to pick and choose, but is the brain able to? Have faved this poem! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/11/2019 3:33:00 AM
Brilliant verse on the lines of the contest. :)
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Date: 6/10/2019 11:47:00 PM
Hello WW … the heart can control our destiny as long as the head falls into line - thank you WW for your fine verse - Lindsay
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Date: 6/10/2019 10:35:00 PM
Bro bro sounds like a bad case of heartburn!;) just joking! Lol wonderfully written! Glad to hear from you! Little puff is great and yes burning the house down!;)
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Date: 6/10/2019 5:44:00 PM
Nicely phrased. Good luck in the writing challenge. Jeanne
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Date: 6/10/2019 3:29:00 PM
beautifully penned ^WW^ good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2019 3:03:00 PM
Excellent! A FAV. Well done :)
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Date: 6/10/2019 1:03:00 PM
- The heart takes many choices in life ... lovely written, W.W. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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