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" PROMISED BLISS " MY PHOTO, ©

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Egoism, This potentially explosive device That unobserved is lurking on The foundations of every relationship Could easily go off at every given moment Because It may be triggered by: A misused word A misunderstanding A disrespectful remark An ironic look Or Even an inappropriate gesture And by doing so Is capable to bring down the edifice of love That So painstakingly is built, Throughout the years by the participants, Would be wise to be disarmed by both parties Before It explodes and chatters all dreams and Aspirations Of The hearts and souls involved Leaving Behind only the ruins of their Promised bliss! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 March 2021

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Date: 3/7/2021 2:56:00 PM
Yes, we must be vigilant with these precious relationships. Well expressed Demetrios.
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Date: 3/7/2021 1:37:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, I agree with you wise words. Ego has been the fall of many relationships. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/6/2021 11:37:00 PM
Quite sage advice you have penned.
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:20:00 PM
Very wise words of advice my friend. As always excellent and sage. Loved the pic as always too. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/6/2021 5:52:00 AM
Wisdom words my friend. Small things can trigger unintended consequences when minds are troubled in daily grind. Lovely garden!
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:39:00 AM
You are to kind , my friend, Vijay. Thank you very much for your gracious visit and comment. Blessings
Date: 3/6/2021 1:35:00 AM
It would certainly cause a great divide in any relationship Demetrios, even those built on a solid ground. Tom
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Date: 3/6/2021 5:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, my friend, Tom! Blessings!

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