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Expialidocious Love

Wonderful love dreams thrilled young Cali.
She sung of such with good friend, Sally.
Extraordinary and precocious,
her thoughts felt expialidocious.

Expialidocious were heart thumps.
Precocious fantasies raised goosebumps.
Sally thought her love, fragalistic.
Cali said, "joy's not fatalistic."

For Cali, hushed love was great enough.

Copyright © CayCay Jennings | Year Posted 2025

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Dr. Padmashree R P Date: 5/24/2025 1:23:00 AM Congratulations CayCay on your winning. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/23/2025 7:20:00 AM Love this CayCay! Precocious fantasies! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 5/23/2025 8:55:00 AM That an enthusiastic comment for you, Kim. I'll treasure it. Congrats on first place, that'll prevent any need for a spoonful of medicine. CayCay

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/22/2025 11:02:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your top win....... Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 5/23/2025 8:57:00 AM Congrats to you, too, Paula. Seems Mary Poppins is #1 for both of us. Thanks ... CayCay

Terry Miller Date: 5/22/2025 8:16:00 AM CayCay, congratulations on your top win in Charles' tough competition, great poem. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 5/22/2025 7:16:00 AM CayCay, Congratulations on your top win in this very difficult contest! Love the poem...thanks for entering my contest! Charlie Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 5/23/2025 9:04:00 AM Thank you, Charles, for once again sponsoring. You are good to the citizens of Soup. I want to share that every time I wrote according to the directions, I'd realize I hadn't, there was another and I'd start all over again (I think 3 times.) My eyes were crossed by the time I finished. This is the first contest that reduced me to cussing while writing! Kinda funny. None of that's on you, it just wasn't my day for multiple directions comprehension! Again, thank you ... CayCay

I Am Anaya Date: 5/22/2025 6:55:00 AM Cay Cay, Congratulations on your top win! The thought does count, super~ Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 5/23/2025 8:52:00 AM Thanks Sweetie, my eyes were crossed by the time I finished this Mary Poppins ditty. CayCay

Duke Beaufort Date: 3/30/2025 4:37:00 PM CayCay, good point made. Actions do speak louder than words. We're a bit stuck with words here, so we hope the pen is mighty. Take care and smiles!! Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/30/2025 3:35:00 AM The word that is uttered when you don't know what to reply. Super! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/29/2025 10:03:00 PM Ha, ha. It was only 'hushpuppy love!' :) Gershon Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/29/2025 10:39:00 AM I quite like this. Not sure yet what the judge wants. I need to hurry and figure it out. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 3/29/2025 11:02:00 AM First I thought the 4 words composing Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious must be used. Done. Then I saw 2nd verse first lines must start w/ 1st verse end words, blew my wee mind, but I wrote one more time. THEN I realized I had to use good, great, wonderful and extraordinary. Such an extraordinary writing experience, my peps were wonderful while I acted anything but good, it was great to finish ... CayCay