Expialidocious Love

Wonderful love dreams thrilled young Cali.
She sung of such with good friend, Sally.
Extraordinary and precocious,
her thoughts felt expialidocious.

Expialidocious were heart thumps.
Precocious fantasies raised goosebumps.
Sally thought her love, fragalistic.
Cali said, "joy's not fatalistic."

For Cali, hushed love was great enough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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R P Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 1:23 AM
Congratulations CayCay on your winning.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Love this CayCay! Precocious fantasies!
Godwin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 8:55 AM
That an enthusiastic comment for you, Kim. I'll treasure it. Congrats on first place, that'll prevent any need for a spoonful of medicine. CayCay
Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your top win.......
Godwin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 8:57 AM
Congrats to you, too, Paula. Seems Mary Poppins is #1 for both of us. Thanks ... CayCay
Miller Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 8:16 AM
CayCay, congratulations on your top win in Charles' tough competition, great poem.
Messina Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 7:16 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your top win in this very difficult contest! Love the poem...thanks for entering my contest! Charlie
Godwin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Thank you, Charles, for once again sponsoring. You are good to the citizens of Soup. I want to share that every time I wrote according to the directions, I'd realize I hadn't, there was another and I'd start all over again (I think 3 times.) My eyes were crossed by the time I finished. This is the first contest that reduced me to cussing while writing! Kinda funny. None of that's on you, it just wasn't my day for multiple directions comprehension! Again, thank you ... CayCay
Anaya Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 6:55 AM
Cay Cay, Congratulations on your top win! The thought does count, super~
Godwin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Thanks Sweetie, my eyes were crossed by the time I finished this Mary Poppins ditty. CayCay
Beaufort Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 4:37 PM
CayCay, good point made. Actions do speak louder than words. We're a bit stuck with words here, so we hope the pen is mighty. Take care and smiles!!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 3:35 AM
The word that is uttered when you don't know what to reply. Super!
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:03 PM
Ha, ha. It was only 'hushpuppy love!' :) Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:39 AM
I quite like this. Not sure yet what the judge wants. I need to hurry and figure it out.
Godwin Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 11:02 AM
First I thought the 4 words composing Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious must be used. Done. Then I saw 2nd verse first lines must start w/ 1st verse end words, blew my wee mind, but I wrote one more time. THEN I realized I had to use good, great, wonderful and extraordinary. Such an extraordinary writing experience, my peps were wonderful while I acted anything but good, it was great to finish ... CayCay
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