Get Your Premium Membership

Experience 101

Listen to poem:
It was my first summer job I didn’t feel quite ready but I tossed all hesitation aside it was time to stretch my wings I felt lucky and tried to measure up as summer camp counselor on this beautiful woodsy island where nature abounded I was a full week into it things were running smooth I was starting to fit in as best I could until it happened late one night In the deepest darkness I met my nemesis a teenie weenie itsy bitsy mouse I let out a scream to wake the dead that echoed clear across the lake Coincidentally soon afterwards it was decided they didn’t need quite as many counselors I’ll always remember them polite as could be as I was being thanked for my services Read on air by invitation ~ May 19, 2021 'WORDS & MUSIC' AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on April 15, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/20/2021 8:32:00 PM
Luckily my first job was as a 'day' camp counselor, or I might have suffered the same fate (I was scared of mice, too)! First jobs are tough. A nice retelling! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2021 6:38:00 AM
My first job at age 16 was as a telemarketer. I lasted there for a full hour. This is a nice write that reminded me of the old Bill Murray movie "Meatballs".
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2021 4:23:00 PM
Gosh. I guess electronic relationships are deeper than I thought. Couldn't bring myself to laugh at this at all. Just felt bad for you, that's all.... I guess you didn't go into nursing either, eh?... Love that title too, Line. ~ No Shame on U! :) gw
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2021 6:59:00 PM
LOL ~ I was young. No didn't go into nursing either ~
Date: 4/16/2021 12:18:00 PM
Instantly reminded me of an aunt who opened her oven door and out popped a little mouse; she went bonkers, and I laughed so hard it was impossible to catch the mouse! Well done! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks, Rico ~ lol
Date: 4/15/2021 8:12:00 PM
Line, What a tale of a scary tail ot seems. Now you're the camp counselor of dreams. -Richard
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2021 8:46:00 PM
more like nightmares ~ lol
Date: 4/15/2021 3:32:00 PM
It's their long tails that give folk a fright, they make your skin crawl. A bad experience you had Line. Tom
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2021 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, Tom ~
Date: 4/15/2021 3:13:00 PM
Fun story for me, but hard for you then
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2021 7:53:00 PM
Nah ~ hindsight is 20/20
Date: 4/15/2021 1:14:00 PM
ha! i don't know if this is true or not, line, (although it sure sounds true), but you've told the story so well in your poem. great ending, too!
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2021 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene ~ It's all true
Date: 4/15/2021 12:18:00 PM
This made me giggle! Mice are devious little creatures.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2021 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, Isabella ~

Book: Shattered Sighs