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Experience 101

It was my first summer job
I didn’t feel quite ready 
but I tossed all hesitation aside
it was time to stretch my wings

I felt lucky and tried to measure up
as summer camp counselor
on this beautiful woodsy island
where nature abounded

I was a full week into it
things were running smooth
I was starting to fit in as best I could
until it happened late one night

In the deepest darkness I met my nemesis
a teenie weenie itsy bitsy mouse 
I let out a scream to wake the dead
that echoed clear across the lake

Coincidentally soon afterwards it was decided
they didn’t need quite as many counselors
I’ll always remember them polite as could be
as I was being thanked for my services



Read on air by invitation  ~  May 19, 2021  'WORDS & MUSIC'

AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Buehler Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Luckily my first job was as a 'day' camp counselor, or I might have suffered the same fate (I was scared of mice, too)! First jobs are tough. A nice retelling! :)
Pettit Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 6:38 AM
My first job at age 16 was as a telemarketer. I lasted there for a full hour. This is a nice write that reminded me of the old Bill Murray movie "Meatballs".
Wolf Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:23 PM
Gosh. I guess electronic relationships are deeper than I thought. Couldn't bring myself to laugh at this at all. Just felt bad for you, that's all.... I guess you didn't go into nursing either, eh?... Love that title too, Line. ~ No Shame on U! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 6:59 PM
LOL ~ I was young. No didn't go into nursing either ~
Leffanta Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Instantly reminded me of an aunt who opened her oven door and out popped a little mouse; she went bonkers, and I laughed so hard it was impossible to catch the mouse! Well done! Aloha! Rico
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Thanks, Rico ~ lol
Theraven Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Line, What a tale of a scary tail ot seems. Now you're the camp counselor of dreams. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:46 PM
more like nightmares ~ lol
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 3:32 PM
It's their long tails that give folk a fright, they make your skin crawl. A bad experience you had Line. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Thanks, Tom ~
Borke Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Fun story for me, but hard for you then
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Nah ~ hindsight is 20/20
Bauer Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 1:14 PM
ha! i don't know if this is true or not, line, (although it sure sounds true), but you've told the story so well in your poem. great ending, too!
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Thanks, Ilene ~ It's all true
Clark Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 12:18 PM
This made me giggle! Mice are devious little creatures.
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Thanks, Isabella ~
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