Expenditures

Time is boundless when you're young. You want school days to fly so in summer you'll be sprung loose upon the world. Touch sky, Butterfly! Vitality is yours; songs unsung will surely come by and by. One day you go away, leave home, friends; finally. . . Youth. Some tread steadily; others stray from convention's pathway, and truth unfolds to you its grey. Life quickens its pace. You'll stumble or run or walk with grace beneath a waning sun. Midway a rut confronts you. . . Worse, an unexpected cut. Those surviving keep arriving spent. This is one PD will never have seen for her contest. It is a form that requires six parts, and the form is not listed at Soup. Stanza one uses six lines with six words per line (not syllables, but words). STanza 2 is a five-line stanza with five words per line. You continue in this way decreasing lines and number of words in the lines until you arrive at a single one-word line in the bottom stanza! Maybe I will try this form one day in a contest!! (I rhymed this, but it does not have to be rhymed)

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Date: 1/23/2015 9:19:00 AM
Just found this sweet write.. Unique form executed so very well with fine flow, rhyme and message.. I see it won in a contest too! Congrats..... A7
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Date: 1/21/2015 8:35:00 AM
Whatever form you use you have me riveted till the end.
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:43:00 PM
A lot being said here in a beautiful way…big congrats Andrea
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Date: 1/15/2015 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win, I wish I could fav this one again!
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Date: 1/15/2015 4:29:00 AM
Love the sentiment of this write and its structure Andrea - into faves and a 7:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:30:00 AM
Brilliant n outstanding Andrea! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:09:00 AM
I love your style and buy the message,congrats on the win Andrea...huggs
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:39:00 PM
Andrea, Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/23/2014 2:59:00 AM
income or expenditure... what is more important ? I think expenditure. It must be supported by good decision-making to avoid your back and fill. Grand poem as usual. hugs!!
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Date: 10/21/2014 12:43:00 AM
I just love it when i don't even realize I'm reading a specific form of poetry until it's mentioned to me (especially one so obscure) - that's a sign of good wordsmith. Now as to theme of your poem I thought it clever how the form matched what you were talking about... the words running out as time was running out. So cool!
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Date: 10/15/2014 10:06:00 AM
I realized this form is like the Diminished Hexaverse only you are counting words instead of syllables.
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Date: 10/15/2014 8:49:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Love the line "and truth unfolds to you its grey" As you grow you learn life has many shades, not all black and white" This looks like a fun form. I may try it.
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Date: 10/11/2014 3:23:00 PM
such truth here, Andrea - love this form too. Yes, it would make a fun form for a contest
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:18:00 AM
Love the way you arranged this like a twister. Life is like that, eh? Love, daver
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:17:00 AM
Andrea....the method you applied in form....to arrive at the last word works very good....i noticed my anticipation quicken as the stanza's shortened, along with the energy increase in the life evolution you well describe....nicely done! jimbo
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Date: 10/10/2014 5:12:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by..When one gathers turnip greens from the garden, washing of the greens is required..I had washed the greens through four waters and there was the Lady Bug floating still alive..I had to wash them two more times to make sure I wasn't going to cook any bugs..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2014 7:53:00 PM
really very beautifully painted andrea
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Date: 10/9/2014 3:44:00 PM
This is almost like a 'Shape' poem...I shall be copy/pasting this gem to study it carefully; this being one of yours I MIGHT be able to pull off. You somethun else you know that? - Tim
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Date: 10/9/2014 12:33:00 PM
I remember this form..Great work..We spent our youth foolishly sometimes and we don't know what we missed until it is way too late..I enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page and blog..I appreciate the kind and encouraging words..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2014 12:36:00 PM
Is this called a diminished hexaverse?..I can't remember the form's name..Sara
Date: 10/9/2014 2:10:00 AM
Excellent. Interesting write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/8/2014 10:24:00 PM
This is cool, I would love to try it for a contest, nudge nudge. You're awesome :)
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Date: 10/8/2014 8:59:00 PM
wow! what an interesting form and one with which you've created a masterpiece, andrea! bravo!
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Date: 10/8/2014 4:38:00 PM
Oh glad i came to this wonder Andrea,, yes i have seen this form before and even written in it...So much truth in your sentiment of this poem,,,like it so much i do...
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Date: 10/8/2014 4:24:00 PM
Love the form and all that is inside...I just filled out a couple college scholarship applications for my oldest. Seems not so long ago I was pushing him in the stroller...time flies when you're having fun...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:59:00 PM
The second we are born we begin to die. This is a very challenging write. I also want to do something very difficult for Linda's contest. Maybe a nursery rhyme. I am going to have to fav this one for my records.
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