Kristen Bruni Poet Limerick

Expectations

You're waiting for the phone to ring
Measuring the time while you sing
Transform love to more
Drunken by your roar
This day is like a bee's sting.

Such a passion driven day
Is it all just too cliche
Stop thinking so much
Let me feel your soft touch
Oh please do not betray.

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Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2011 at 7:03 PM Nice little limerick series of longing!

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2011 at 3:07 PM Krisen, well done on both limerick.. tobad we have to expect so much from certain peeps... sure enjoyed,..p.d.

Constance La France January 22, 2011 at 7:57 PM Enjoyed reading your poem, best of luck in the contest~~

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2011 at 1:46 AM fine write with crisp element of surprise, kristen... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta January 21, 2011 at 6:19 PM Nice sensual and lovely expectations with a doubt to be betrayed, kristen