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Life changes come in little increments
along a fated journey fraught with twists and turns.

But once in a while
changes come on sudden and dramatic
like the day you passed away.

A fatal blow ~
the instant when I became unwhole
a widow
a casualty of love.

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Date: 8/17/2025 4:40:00 PM
perfectly done for the contest...concise yet meaningful. Best wishes with the contest. hugs, Sara PS Sorry you experienced such a tragic, altering eveng.
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Date: 8/17/2025 9:34:00 PM
Thanks, Sara ~

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