Expect

Innocent you are
truth tho' only by you
for where i leave and hug you
and forget once i left thee
much i see remain haar
for when i dive and bear
sought respect not any nor none 
you expect more than any
more than I

beautytruthvoicewritingfree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

September 20, 2016 at 1:38 PM

Talin, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Talin Kalishian

September 23, 2016 at 12:58 PM

Hi Linda, i was wondering if you can help me; wouldn't it be better if all poets who join contests and are put a side for any reason, the reason be mentioned to the poet him or herself. It will help in many ways i am sure you can figure something out . Thank you again

Skat A

September 19, 2016 at 9:33 PM

Talin K, Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT